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The Submission of Little Emmie

By: Zoe Blake
Published By: Blushing Press
Copyright: ©2014 by Blushing Books® and Zoe Blake Revised August 2016
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I want you to listen very carefully. According to the law, I own you. I am responsible for every facet of your life. I clothe, feed and shelter you. You do nothing without my knowledge or permission. Some men treat a marriage as a partnership; I am not one of those men. This is not a partnership. For generations the men in my family have chosen to honor this responsibility by treating their women as little girls, controlling every aspect of their life. This is now your new life. You will be treated like my very special little girl. I will control when and how you will be bathed, what you will wear, when you sleep, what you eat. I will control everything. Do you understand me?

Such is Emily's introduction to marriage with the mysterious man who shows up to claim her from an unhappy home not long after her eighteenth birthday. Lord Richard Burkewood is not looking for a traditional wife, but a little girl that he can pamper and punish and train. Emily becomes Emmie under his care, and begins her path to complete submission at the hands of her "Papa" and nanny, Mrs. Pew. This sexually- charged Victorian age play by new author Zoe Blake is so richly detailed that readers can almost imagine themselves experiencing the erotic sexual pleasures and torments Emily faces as she relinquishes total control to the powerful Lord Burkewood.

This is a must-read debut for anyone who loves the age play genre. If you've never read an age play book, this will be the one to get you hooked.

CHAPTER ONE: The Meeting

"I will send a carriage first thing tomorrow morning. Make sure she is ready and waiting. She will not require any belongings. Send her out with the clothes on her back."

Emily could barely make out the words through the thick wooden door to her stepfather's study. They were uttered in a low, dark timbre by the menacing stranger who had arrived not twenty minutes earlier.

Her stepfather had been locked in the study with his man of affairs all morning long. He was a twitchy, nervous sort of man - quick to a temper - and a degenerate gambler and drinker. Since her mother’s death two years earlier, his tenuous hold on morality had snapped. He would stay away from home for days at a time. When he did return he reeked of some kind of cloyingly sweet smoke. Emily heard the servants whispering about opium but she wasn't familiar with the word and didn't dare ask. Lately, his gambling had taken a turn for the worse, putting at risk their house and all their possessions. With her mother gone and her stepfather barely able to take care of himself, it fell to eighteen-year-old Emily to manage the family estate with an ever-dwindling supply of funds her stepfather blamed on bad investments. She often spent sleepless nights wondering how she was going to dodge creditors or pay the meager staff. The weight of responsibility on her young shoulders was crushing.

Now he was locked in his study, and Emily could only wonder what was going on. The night before, he’d arrived home early. She and the servants were used to him stumbling through the door in the early dawn hours, but it was barely eight o'clock in the evening when he arrived in an obvious state of agitation and demanding that someone call his man of affairs.

"George!" She never called him father. She refused. Her own father died while she was still a baby and the man before her had been a disgrace to the title.

"What is the matter?” she asked, seeking to quiet him. “Please calm down."

"Shut the fuck up!" He turned on her viciously, his hand connecting with her fragile cheek. Emily fell to the floor, clutching her now burning face. The stinging slap brought tears to her eyes. He was too slight of man to hit truly hard, but she knew from experience it would not leave a mark.

"The bastard will ruin me!” Her stepfather began to pace, speaking more to himself than to her. “He's too powerful. He has too many connections." George complained as he stalked the floor around Emily, who was still too shocked and scared to move.

It took a distant knock on the front door to bring her to her feet. Without a butler to answer the door, Emily wearily stumbled to handle the task herself, careful to angle her burning face away from the visitor a messenger clad in fine livery. She thanked him quietly as she took the note he delivered.

"His Lordship instructed I was to wait for an answer," the messenger said as Emily was about to close the door.

Whoever His Lordship was, he had an exceptionally well-trained footman. The man's gaze did not so much as flicker at her obviously disheveled appearance and red, teary-eyed face.

"Of course, please wait here," Emily said, gesturing to a seat near the entryway. She tentatively took the message to her stepfather, who ripped the note from her hand, but when she tried to leave the room he stopped her.

"Don't move," her stepfather snarled as he tore at the note's wax seal. An ugly smile lit up his features as he eyed Emily.

"I'm saved!" he shouted with glee. "And all I have to do is get rid of you!"

"What?" Emily gasped.

"He wants to marry you, although I cannot see why. You’re such a scrawny little thing. I would have given him a go between your legs without the shackle of marriage but he insists." Her stepfather sneered. "It's to be done tomorrow."

Emily's head began to spin. She knew she would have to marry one day and had seen it as only way to escape the hell she was currently enduring. But so soon? And with a man she had never laid eyes on? Of course as the final indignity she was obviously being married off as a way to settle her foolish stepfather's gambling debts!

"I won't do it!" she announced with more conviction than she felt.

But her stepfather just laughed. "I don’t need your permission or acceptance. I am your guardian and you will do as I say." He bent over his desk and penned a quick reply to His Lordship.

"Take this to his footman," he ordered.

Dejected, Emily complied. She knew there was no fighting him. The law was on his side, and with no money or connections she would have no way to take care of herself if she tried to flee. She would be at the mercy of the streets. Surely the life of a Lady even to a man she did not know - would be better than such a fate.

She brought the note to the waiting footman, eyeing him carefully. He was well appointed and professional, an obvious reflection of the man he worked for. Dare she hope?

"What sort of man is your employer?" she asked, hoping for any insight into the sort of man who would ask for her hand.

"Strict but fair," came the short reply.

The next morning she caught a glimpse of the man himself from an upper window as he descended from a fine phaeton drawn by a pair of matching dapple gray horses. He was very tall, and strode forward with the confident grace that comes with wealth and privilege. He wore a long, black dress coat with a full collar that emphasized his broad shoulders. He also wore a silk top hat, the brim of which prevented a look at his face. Emily continued to watch until he crossed the threshold of her home, disappearing from view.

Once she was sure the mysterious Lord and her stepfather were ensconced in the study, she carefully descended the central staircase and tiptoed to the door, straining to hear the conversation that would seal her fate.

"Well, well...it takes a great deal of influence to get a special marriage license so quickly, and from the archbishop no less.” She heard the wheedling, high-pitched tone of her stepfather, slavish with admiration. His Lordship's reply was too low to hear.

So this was truly happening, Emily thought. She was effectively married off. She knew with a special license the marriage did not have to take place in a Church, so noone could attest she had not agreed to the match. Neither her acceptance nor even her presence was required. But why would a man of rank even seek a bride who had never been out in society? Emily’s stepfather had refused to sponsor her socially, refusing to spend the money on what he termed “frippery” necessary for the kind of public occasions that would have put her within sight of eligible suitors. Emily had never been to a ball or any other silly social gathering females her age delighted in around London. She had no friends outside of the servants. Why would this mysterious lord want her hand in marriage in exchange for what she was sure was a sizable voucher from her stepfather?

"If you ask me, this more than settles the matter,” her stepfather was saying. “I think you are getting too much of a bargain out of it. Emily is a comely lass and assuredly untouched. I think perhaps you should owe me some additional coin for dropping such a prize in your lap. In fact..." But his bold speech was abruptly cut short by the sound of a crash and feet scuffling. She heard the low, rich tone of His Lordship but again the words spoken were too low for her to make out through the door.

"I'm sorry! I'm sorry! Please let go!" her stepfather was pleading. She heard another crash and the study door swung open violently. Caught completely by surprise, Emily could only gasp and flatten herself against the wall, hoping that if she remained still the lord would not see her. She held her breath as he turned back to the study to address her stepfather where he lay sprawled on the floor.

"She is mine now,” he said. “Never attempt to contact her or I will ruin you." He turned to her then and she could feel his eyes assessing her as he said the last bit, but kept her face averted, refusing to meet his gaze. Her heart was beating so fast she thought she might faint as she felt him take a step closer. He smelled faintly of leather and tobacco and she could feel the heat radiate from his body as he braced one arm against the wall high above her head, leaning in. Her corset felt tight and constricting as she struggled to breathe. The silence stretched. Finally, she felt his gloved fingers below her chin, forcing her gaze up.

His eyes were cold, the anger towards her stepfather still present in the gray depths. But his gaze softened as he focused on her face. He was incredibly handsome with a strong brow, sharp jaw and aristocratic nose. Emily was surprised to see his mouth quirked in a half smile.

"Little girls who eavesdrop get punished," he said with only a hint of amusement. He stroked her cheek, leaving a trail of heat.

And then he was gone.

She felt like he swooped all the air and energy out of the room with his departure. It took her several moments to recover from the intensity of his gaze.

"Little girl?" Emily wondered in confusion.

CHAPTER TWO: New Home

Emily could barely sleep. She could not remember the last time she had eaten and was consumed by a nervous energy. Her stepfather refused to answer any of her questions about her new husband. All she was told was that the paperwork had been signed and the whole business wrapped up without so much as a by your leave to her.

She was informed that she would not be allowed to take any of her belongings to her new home, not that there was much left to take anyway; her stepfather had seen to that. Since she did not have to occupy herself with packing for her departure, Emily busied herself instead by trying to rectify the household accounts and gathering any documents her stepfather would need for the continued running of the estate. This was not the usual work of a woman but there really had been no other option. After hours of poring over countless columns of numbers and legal documents, she retired to her bed with a pounding headache, only to be rudely shaken awake in the dawn hours by her stepfather.

"Get up you lazy tart!" he barked. "The carriage will be here soon."

Emily poured some frigid water from the pitcher in the corner into a basin and splashed her face and arms. Warms baths were for households with full staffs and money. When the carriage did arrive, her stepfather was nowhere to be seen. No one bade her farewell save for the weary housekeeper. Emily entered the carriage knowing nothing of her new life, not even her own married name.

The carriage was richly appointed with soft, brown leather cushions. In the center of the seat across from her was a stuffed bunny with a large, pink bow wrapped around its neck; in its lap was a card.

For my Little Emmie, it said.

Emily studied the note, perplexed. It seemed an odd way to greet one’s wife, and she assumed her new husband was referencing her size. She was diminutive, and her cheeks warmed at the memory of how he had towered over her when he’d caught her spying. But the gift, if it was a gift. A toy bunny? How childlike, she thought, as she reached for the stuffed animal. Its fur was soft and plush and she couldn't help rubbing it against her cheek. Curling her legs up on the seat, she cuddled with the bunny as the gentle rocking motion of the carriage lulled her into sleep.

And that’s how Lord Richard Burkewood found his new bride when the carriage pulled up to his secluded country estate curled up fast asleep with the bunny clutched to her chest.

"Isn't she precious?" exclaimed his housekeeper, Mrs. Weatherby, eagerly peering over his shoulder.

Lord Burkewood could not agree more. He looked down at Emily's features, softened in sleep. At barely five-feet in height, she was dwarfed by his over six-foot frame. She had soft, light brown hair, currently constricted into a tight bun he knew would fall in gentle waves to her waist once loosed. Despite her small stature, she had generous breasts and rounded hips. He particularly loved her buttocks, which were round and pert. He couldn't wait to see them blush from the heat of his hand.

He smiled, pleased that she was finally here with him. At thirty-eight years of age, Lord Burkewood had been a good friend of Emily’s mother, and had watched Emily grow up, but always from a distance. He was delighted that she had retained her doll-like appearance, with a rosebud mouth and large eyes that dominated her face.

Lord Burkewood remembered Emily’s mother as being equally beautiful, but also with a willful independence that led to a poor choice in husbands. He knew she did not want the same for her daughter, and even though she knew the kind of lifestyle and discipline the Burkewood family espoused, she’d come to him shortly before her death and bade Lord Burkewood to care for Emily once she was gone. It was an easy promise to fulfill, and her stepfather's degenerate gambling made it even easier. It had been difficult to wait until the two long years till she was of a proper age and out of mourning, but he’d exercised restraint. And now Emily was his.

He saw her little body tense as she became aware the soft rocking of the carriage had stopped. She slowly stretched and turned her big sleepy eyes to his.

"Your Lordship!" she exclaimed, at a loss to comment further. Lord Burkewood took note of the dark circles under her eyes and her gaunt appearance. 

"Mrs. Weatherby, please take Mrs. Pew’s charge to her room and see that she is bathed and rested," he said without taking his eyes off Emily. His voice sounding more strained then he intended, for he had to restrain himself from grabbing her by the hand and dragging her to his bed. The marriage papers were all in line, but Lord Burkewood could not truly consider Emmie to be his until he spread her legs and thrust his cock deep inside, taking her virginity. His body was coiled with tension. Perhaps a long ride across his estate would help tamp down his primal urges, and give her a chance to become acclimated to her new home.

"Young Lady, I will see you at dinner. As there are no adult guests, you will be permitted to dine with me." With those perplexing words, he turned and mounted his saddled horse, which had been waiting patiently to the side. "Mind Mrs. Weatherby and Mrs. Pew,” he ordered. “Don't give them any sass."

Emily was terribly confused. Whatever reception she was expecting, this had not been it. As the new lady of the house, she should have been introduced to the staff. At the very least, her Husband could have escorted her into her new home. Instead, he spoke to her as if she were a child!  What on earth did he mean by implying she would not be eating with other adults?

Martha on 08/05/2015 02:08pm
Toooooo Much for me
Martha on 08/05/2015 02:08pm
Toooooo Much for me
Tamara on 10/14/2014 08:31pm
Very Hot book! I didn't really feel any "romance" in this story but that didn't detract from the heat. I'm not a fan of nannys in age play stories but I did not mind it that much in this book. Looking for a love story? This isn't it. Looking for a HOT age play story? You found it.
Tamara on 10/14/2014 08:31pm
"Very Hot book! I didn't really feel any ""romance"" in this story but that didn't detract from the heat. I'm not a fan of nannys in age play stories but I did not mind it that much in this book. Looking for a love story? This isn't it. Looking for a HOT age play story? You found it."
S on 09/22/2014 08:15am
A very hot AP story. In fact, I don't think the author left anything out!!! Really great story so much so that the characters seemed like they were in the room with me.
S on 09/22/2014 08:15am
A very hot AP story. In fact, I don't think the author left anything out!!! Really great story so much so that the characters seemed like they were in the room with me.
Kim on 09/19/2014 07:04pm
I loved this book! I wish it had been longer but it was great!
Kim on 09/19/2014 07:04pm
I loved this book! I wish it had been longer but it was great!
Deena on 09/14/2014 08:11am
Good read
Deena on 09/14/2014 08:11am
Good read
Susan on 09/01/2014 04:51am
Loved this book and can't wait for the sequel. Keep the story going.
Susan on 09/01/2014 04:51am
Loved this book and can't wait for the sequel. Keep the story going.
Ma on 08/29/2014 07:17am
Very good.
Ma on 08/29/2014 07:17am
Very good.
Redrabbitt on 08/25/2014 07:44pm
A wonderfully written Victorian Age-play story. Emily is living with her stepfather, her mother passed away two years prior. She is running his household while he gambles and drinks. The present conditions are dire and the debt to Lord Burkewood will be paid with none other than herself. She overhears a conversation when a gentlemen comes to call and finds out he is taking her away as his bride and she has no say. She arrives at his home in the country and is taken to a nursery where she has a Nanny. Her training begins immediately as his child-bride. This story is the training and submission of Emmie to her Papa/Husband, Lord Richard Burkewood. It contains a D/s relationship, domestic discipline by both the Nanny and Papa, explicit sex, anal play, medical play and humiliation in an age play situation.
Redrabbitt on 08/25/2014 07:44pm
A wonderfully written Victorian Age-play story. Emily is living with her stepfather, her mother passed away two years prior. She is running his household while he gambles and drinks. The present conditions are dire and the debt to Lord Burkewood will be paid with none other than herself. She overhears a conversation when a gentlemen comes to call and finds out he is taking her away as his bride and she has no say. She arrives at his home in the country and is taken to a nursery where she has a Nanny. Her training begins immediately as his child-bride. This story is the training and submission of Emmie to her Papa/Husband, Lord Richard Burkewood. It contains a D/s relationship, domestic discipline by both the Nanny and Papa, explicit sex, anal play, medical play and humiliation in an age play situation.
La Crimson Femme on 08/24/2014 08:20pm
Calling all age-play lovers, there's a new author in town and her name is Zoe Black! This is a delightful Victorian age-play story with Daddies, nannies and diapers. Those who enjoy Adult Baby Diaper Lover (ABDL) fetish, this is the book for you. Emily is eighteen years old and suffering under her step-father's vices. He gambled away the home and he can't manage his own household. Emily is stressed as she takes on all the duties of a wife with none of the benefits. She wishes for a change. Little does she know her deceased mother appealed to a friend to take care of her daughter in the event Emily is left destitute. Lord Richard is keeping an eye on Emily since her mother's passing. When the time is right, he maneuvers Emily into a rushed wedding. I am a huge fan of ageplay, specifically when a woman is forced to be a baby too. The humiliation in wearing a diaper, sucking a pacifier and being taken care of by a nanny is a guilty pleasure. Ms. Black hits all my happy kink buttons with enema, anal training, oral training, baby bottles and more. This book definitely goes into my not so secret spank bank for many re-reads. The characters in this story are great. Lord Richard is a Daddy Dom who is strict and consistent. The training he puts Emily aka Emmie through are fabulous. The addition of a nanny and governess is wonderful. The education Emmie learns at these deviant hands is panty wetting goodness. The descriptions of each act are well done. It's easy to visualize every depraved act Emmie suffers at the hands of her One only hopes there are more stories to come with Little Emmie. The story leaves the reader wanting more. Emmie is just starting to understand her place in the household. If a follow up story with more anal training as well as more degrading sexual acts is available, I'd snap it up in a second. Would it be possible for Emmie to also have a mommy? This would be a lovely addition. Emmie also needs to experience a few more punishment implements. Lastly, if Ms. Black would be so kind as to write another story with Lord Richard's friend finding his little girl, I would be in age-play heaven. This kinky book is highly recommended to age play fanatics. This is one that should not be missed.
La Crimson Femme on 08/24/2014 08:20pm
Calling all age-play lovers, there's a new author in town and her name is Zoe Black! This is a delightful Victorian age-play story with Daddies, nannies and diapers. Those who enjoy Adult Baby Diaper Lover (ABDL) fetish, this is the book for you. Emily is eighteen years old and suffering under her step-father's vices. He gambled away the home and he can't manage his own household. Emily is stressed as she takes on all the duties of a wife with none of the benefits. She wishes for a change. Little does she know her deceased mother appealed to a friend to take care of her daughter in the event Emily is left destitute. Lord Richard is keeping an eye on Emily since her mother's passing. When the time is right, he maneuvers Emily into a rushed wedding. I am a huge fan of ageplay, specifically when a woman is forced to be a baby too. The humiliation in wearing a diaper, sucking a pacifier and being taken care of by a nanny is a guilty pleasure. Ms. Black hits all my happy kink buttons with enema, anal training, oral training, baby bottles and more. This book definitely goes into my not so secret spank bank for many re-reads. The characters in this story are great. Lord Richard is a Daddy Dom who is strict and consistent. The training he puts Emily aka Emmie through are fabulous. The addition of a nanny and governess is wonderful. The education Emmie learns at these deviant hands is panty wetting goodness. The descriptions of each act are well done. It's easy to visualize every depraved act Emmie suffers at the hands of her One only hopes there are more stories to come with Little Emmie. The story leaves the reader wanting more. Emmie is just starting to understand her place in the household. If a follow up story with more anal training as well as more degrading sexual acts is available, I'd snap it up in a second. Would it be possible for Emmie to also have a mommy? This would be a lovely addition. Emmie also needs to experience a few more punishment implements. Lastly, if Ms. Black would be so kind as to write another story with Lord Richard's friend finding his little girl, I would be in age-play heaven. This kinky book is highly recommended to age play fanatics. This is one that should not be missed.
Marybeth on 08/12/2014 07:58pm
This is the story of Emily. She is neglected by her stepfather and he, basically, sells her to Lord Richard Burkewood. Richard knew Emily’s mother and when her mother knew she was dying, asked Richard to care for Emily, even though she knew how Burkewood men treated their wives. They didn’t want wives, they wanted little girls. Emily was to become Richard’s little girl. When she arrived at her new home, she was immediately treated as a little girl and stripped by her nanny. Emily resisted and she was spanked for her trouble. Eventually, she is dressed as a little girl and put down for a nap while immobilized by cuffs in a fetal position. Once awake, she is dressed, brought to her Papa and he explains some of what her life will be like now. He also tells her that she is now Emmie. This is a pretty harsh age-play story. It is non-consensual and Emmie does get punished pretty severely. But, there is also love developing between them. The punishments that Emmie gets are swift and very harsh. She is also subject to training that includes temperature taking and oral and anal training. Even though I squirmed a few times with the descriptions of the punishments, this is a very well written novella. I give it 5 stars.
Marybeth on 08/12/2014 07:58pm
This is the story of Emily. She is neglected by her stepfather and he, basically, sells her to Lord Richard Burkewood. Richard knew Emily۪s mother and when her mother knew she was dying, asked Richard to care for Emily, even though she knew how Burkewood men treated their wives. They didn۪t want wives, they wanted little girls. Emily was to become Richard۪s little girl. When she arrived at her new home, she was immediately treated as a little girl and stripped by her nanny. Emily resisted and she was spanked for her trouble. Eventually, she is dressed as a little girl and put down for a nap while immobilized by cuffs in a fetal position. Once awake, she is dressed, brought to her Papa and he explains some of what her life will be like now. He also tells her that she is now Emmie. This is a pretty harsh age-play story. It is non-consensual and Emmie does get punished pretty severely. But, there is also love developing between them. The punishments that Emmie gets are swift and very harsh. She is also subject to training that includes temperature taking and oral and anal training. Even though I squirmed a few times with the descriptions of the punishments, this is a very well written novella. I give it 5 stars.
Margaret on 08/07/2014 01:56pm
Brilliant, well written. Poor Emmie is thrown into a life that she has no choice about. You will feel for her and the trials she endures. Well described scenes and characters. I would have no problem recommending this story.
Margaret on 08/07/2014 01:56pm
Brilliant, well written. Poor Emmie is thrown into a life that she has no choice about. You will feel for her and the trials she endures. Well described scenes and characters. I would have no problem recommending this story.
Pam on 08/06/2014 11:47am
Has every scenario (and more) that one wants in a "wifelittle-girl/ stern master-husband" book.
Pam on 08/06/2014 11:47am
"Has every scenario (and more) that one wants in a ""wifelittle-girl/ stern master-husband"" book. "
anon on 08/05/2014 01:01pm
Emily has been running a large household by herself for several years. She’s become in an independent, strong woman. Her stepfather sells her as a wife to a wealthy man. The man wants a child/bride. The forced submission is demanded with no prior explanations given Emily. The punishments are rather violent. My problem begins when, after only two nights, Emily not only submits to this behavior, but she seeks her punishments feeling they are necessary. I would expect it to take far longer with more rebellion before an independent woman would submit to this behavior. Still, once my mind let go of this idea, I enjoyed the story.
anon on 08/05/2014 01:01pm
Emily has been running a large household by herself for several years. She۪s become in an independent, strong woman. Her stepfather sells her as a wife to a wealthy man. The man wants a child/bride. The forced submission is demanded with no prior explanations given Emily. The punishments are rather violent. My problem begins when, after only two nights, Emily not only submits to this behavior, but she seeks her punishments feeling they are necessary. I would expect it to take far longer with more rebellion before an independent woman would submit to this behavior. Still, once my mind let go of this idea, I enjoyed the story.
Anne Cassie on 07/29/2014 09:28am
This is a horrifying, erotic and seductive read. I am kind of ashamed of myself that I enjoyed it so much. Maybe being so busy and having so much responsibility makes it seem irresistible to have it all taken away and just focus on being sexual. In reality I am not so sure but in fantasy why not? I thought this was well written and a page turner.
Anne Cassie on 07/29/2014 09:28am
This is a horrifying, erotic and seductive read. I am kind of ashamed of myself that I enjoyed it so much. Maybe being so busy and having so much responsibility makes it seem irresistible to have it all taken away and just focus on being sexual. In reality I am not so sure but in fantasy why not? I thought this was well written and a page turner.
Chelle on 07/27/2014 10:37am
Interesting AP / forced submission novel about a young lady married and expected to call her new husband papa. She has a rather harsh introduction to the lifestyle but Learns to comply quickly. Good Victorian period piece with lots of inventive ap practices. Overall a good book. Looking forward to more from this author.
Chelle on 07/27/2014 10:37am
Interesting AP / forced submission novel about a young lady married and expected to call her new husband papa. She has a rather harsh introduction to the lifestyle but Learns to comply quickly. Good Victorian period piece with lots of inventive ap practices. Overall a good book. Looking forward to more from this author.
Katy Beth McKee on 07/26/2014 05:55pm
Emmie has been living with her horrid step-father and Lord Richard steps in. While the story seems at bit harsh at time it is clear that Lord Richard loves his Emmie and as time comes by she is more and more content with her live and her love.
Katy Beth McKee on 07/26/2014 05:55pm
Emmie has been living with her horrid step-father and Lord Richard steps in. While the story seems at bit harsh at time it is clear that Lord Richard loves his Emmie and as time comes by she is more and more content with her live and her love.
Lasey Lane on 07/25/2014 12:12pm
Emily is sold in marriage to her new husband. She doesn't even know the man to whom she will be married and isn't given a choice. While it is a good escape from her cruel step-father - she is incredibly surprised to find that her husband expects her to live as a little girl. A matter-a-fact nanny quickly takes poor Emily in hand and begins to teach her about being the little girl her husband wants. But, Emily wants a real husband -wife relationship and she wants to be the lady of the house - not a child. Can Emily accept the role being forced upon her? Or can she convince her husband that she should be treated as a lady. This book is very descriptive and paints a very clear picture for the reader to image. I would classify the book as a historical fiction age-play. There are plenty of spankings and other interesting punishments along the way. Emily is a very relatable character. I totally felt for Emily as she struggled to decide how she felt and how she could respond to the situation. Emily's husband is mysterious in many ways. We are hearing/seeing the story mostly through Emily's eyes. This book is long enough to tell the story, but leaves enough to the imagination that readers can fantasize about Emily's life gate the book has ended.
Lasey Lane on 07/25/2014 12:12pm
Emily is sold in marriage to her new husband. She doesn't even know the man to whom she will be married and isn't given a choice. While it is a good escape from her cruel step-father - she is incredibly surprised to find that her husband expects her to live as a little girl. A matter-a-fact nanny quickly takes poor Emily in hand and begins to teach her about being the little girl her husband wants. But, Emily wants a real husband -wife relationship and she wants to be the lady of the house - not a child. Can Emily accept the role being forced upon her? Or can she convince her husband that she should be treated as a lady. This book is very descriptive and paints a very clear picture for the reader to image. I would classify the book as a historical fiction age-play. There are plenty of spankings and other interesting punishments along the way. Emily is a very relatable character. I totally felt for Emily as she struggled to decide how she felt and how she could respond to the situation. Emily's husband is mysterious in many ways. We are hearing/seeing the story mostly through Emily's eyes. This book is long enough to tell the story, but leaves enough to the imagination that readers can fantasize about Emily's life gate the book has ended.
madpuss on 07/22/2014 04:35pm
I thought it was very good. I liked how the story set out to show us what life for Emmie was like from the moment she woke up to falling asleep at night. There was never a dull moment and it was well described including Emmie's feelings on what was happening. For 'Papa' it was all about owning and controlling Emmie. I did wish that 'Papa' had been a little more loving rather than desiring to inflict pain on her.
madpuss on 07/22/2014 04:35pm
I thought it was very good. I liked how the story set out to show us what life for Emmie was like from the moment she woke up to falling asleep at night. There was never a dull moment and it was well described including Emmie's feelings on what was happening. For 'Papa' it was all about owning and controlling Emmie. I did wish that 'Papa' had been a little more loving rather than desiring to inflict pain on her.
Jeanette on 07/22/2014 02:37pm
If this suits your taste then I highly recommend. It's just plain fun. Perhaps a bit rushed to the ending. Can't wait for the next story: Lord Evers, I'm sure.
Jeanette on 07/22/2014 02:37pm
If this suits your taste then I highly recommend. It's just plain fun. Perhaps a bit rushed to the ending. Can't wait for the next story: Lord Evers, I'm sure.
Jeanette on 07/22/2014 02:37pm
If this suits your taste then I highly recommend. It's just plain fun. Perhaps a bit rushed to the ending. Can't wait for the next story: Lord Evers, I'm sure.
Jeanette on 07/22/2014 02:37pm
If this suits your taste then I highly recommend. It's just plain fun. Perhaps a bit rushed to the ending. Can't wait for the next story: Lord Evers, I'm sure.
Denise on 07/21/2014 08:56pm
This story offended me on so many levels, it's hard to describe anything good about it; well there were no typing or grammatical errors. Just once I would like to see a character want this to happen to them, not being forced into it with no choice at all. The nanny was pure evil, I so no love from her what so ever. In other ap stories at least you believe the man loves the girl. This sadistic man loves owning things and being able to do what he wants with them when he wants to with no retribution. I would also love for the female character just once tell him that since i am to be in nappies, suck a bottle and be tied up in bed, there will be no sex; because only pedafiles fuck their baby girls. There really needs to be a fine line between when the papa/daddy play starts and stops. The girl did not submit, she was broken. You beat someone enough, they will eventually agree to anything and will also love their captors. Psychology 101. I loved how the author had the girl rationalize why she should stay with this sadist, her pros: no restrictive clothing and her hair was not put up. That's it! The cons list: Oh let's see diapers, beatings, enemas being made fun of in front of everyone, being tied up in bed, no real love or respect from anyone. Speaking of being tied up, no blood flow below the knee or in the arms, by the way they are positioned. Pacifier in mouth all night restricts breathing, chance of asphyxiation. One last thing, what happens with all this sex going on when she has a baby?
Denise on 07/21/2014 08:56pm
This story offended me on so many levels, it's hard to describe anything good about it; well there were no typing or grammatical errors. Just once I would like to see a character want this to happen to them, not being forced into it with no choice at all. The nanny was pure evil, I so no love from her what so ever. In other ap stories at least you believe the man loves the girl. This sadistic man loves owning things and being able to do what he wants with them when he wants to with no retribution. I would also love for the female character just once tell him that since i am to be in nappies, suck a bottle and be tied up in bed, there will be no sex; because only pedafiles fuck their baby girls. There really needs to be a fine line between when the papa/daddy play starts and stops. The girl did not submit, she was broken. You beat someone enough, they will eventually agree to anything and will also love their captors. Psychology 101. I loved how the author had the girl rationalize why she should stay with this sadist, her pros: no restrictive clothing and her hair was not put up. That's it! The cons list: Oh let's see diapers, beatings, enemas being made fun of in front of everyone, being tied up in bed, no real love or respect from anyone. Speaking of being tied up, no blood flow below the knee or in the arms, by the way they are positioned. Pacifier in mouth all night restricts breathing, chance of asphyxiation. One last thing, what happens with all this sex going on when she has a baby?
Wendy Hefley on 07/21/2014 07:58pm
I really liked the story and am looking forward to much more from this author.
Wendy Hefley on 07/21/2014 07:58pm
I really liked the story and am looking forward to much more from this author.
Meg on 07/20/2014 07:17pm
I love age-play books set in a different era and this one qualifies. 18 year old Emmie is wed to Lord Richard Burkewood without ever meeting him. She is given in exchange for helping clear the debts owed by her opium abusing step-father. She spends her mornings in embarrassing lessons from her nanny and her afternoons in explicit sexual training by her new Papa. Though she is totally unprepared for her lessons, she finds that she is finding pleasure in them as well as in the total freedom from responsibilities allowed her as her Papa’s little girl. The punishments are quick and harsh every time she misbehaves. Her Papa has no care who witnesses her punishments, including forcing her to bare her bottom in front of her Papa’s guest for a humiliating lesson in what happens to naughty little girls. Though she is placed into her Papa’s bed every evening, she is also returned to her nursery every night which made me question the true connection of the two main characters. I felt the story was a bit rushed and ended very abruptly. I wished the author fleshed out the story just a bit more. I did appreciate the author’s use of description to set her surroundings. If you like an age-play novel with very strict training, you should enjoy this one.
Meg on 07/20/2014 07:17pm
I love age-play books set in a different era and this one qualifies. 18 year old Emmie is wed to Lord Richard Burkewood without ever meeting him. She is given in exchange for helping clear the debts owed by her opium abusing step-father. She spends her mornings in embarrassing lessons from her nanny and her afternoons in explicit sexual training by her new Papa. Though she is totally unprepared for her lessons, she finds that she is finding pleasure in them as well as in the total freedom from responsibilities allowed her as her Papa۪s little girl. The punishments are quick and harsh every time she misbehaves. Her Papa has no care who witnesses her punishments, including forcing her to bare her bottom in front of her Papa۪s guest for a humiliating lesson in what happens to naughty little girls. Though she is placed into her Papa۪s bed every evening, she is also returned to her nursery every night which made me question the true connection of the two main characters. I felt the story was a bit rushed and ended very abruptly. I wished the author fleshed out the story just a bit more. I did appreciate the author۪s use of description to set her surroundings. If you like an age-play novel with very strict training, you should enjoy this one.
Meg on 07/20/2014 07:16pm
I love age-play books set in a different era and this one qualifies. 18 year old Emmie is wed to Lord Richard Burkewood without ever meeting him. She is given in exchange for helping clear the debts owed by her opium abusing step-father. She spends her mornings in embarrassing lessons from her nanny and her afternoons in explicit sexual training by her new Papa. Though she is totally unprepared for her lessons, she finds that she is finding pleasure in them as well as in the total freedom from responsibilities allowed her as her Papa’s little girl. The punishments are quick and harsh every time she misbehaves. Her Papa has no care who witnesses her punishments, including forcing her to bare her bottom in front of her Papa’s guest for a humiliating lesson in what happens to naughty little girls. Though she is placed into her Papa’s bed every evening, she is also returned to her nursery every night which made me question the true connection of the two main characters. I felt the story was a bit rushed and ended very abruptly. I wished the author fleshed out the story just a bit more. I did appreciate the author’s use of description to set her surroundings. If you like an age-play novel with very strict training, you should enjoy this one.
Meg on 07/20/2014 07:16pm
I love age-play books set in a different era and this one qualifies. 18 year old Emmie is wed to Lord Richard Burkewood without ever meeting him. She is given in exchange for helping clear the debts owed by her opium abusing step-father. She spends her mornings in embarrassing lessons from her nanny and her afternoons in explicit sexual training by her new Papa. Though she is totally unprepared for her lessons, she finds that she is finding pleasure in them as well as in the total freedom from responsibilities allowed her as her Papa۪s little girl. The punishments are quick and harsh every time she misbehaves. Her Papa has no care who witnesses her punishments, including forcing her to bare her bottom in front of her Papa۪s guest for a humiliating lesson in what happens to naughty little girls. Though she is placed into her Papa۪s bed every evening, she is also returned to her nursery every night which made me question the true connection of the two main characters. I felt the story was a bit rushed and ended very abruptly. I wished the author fleshed out the story just a bit more. I did appreciate the author۪s use of description to set her surroundings. If you like an age-play novel with very strict training, you should enjoy this one.
Laura on 07/20/2014 03:24pm
Eighteen year old Emily lives with her stepfather George, her mother having passed away two years earlier. George is to put it kindly a degenerate gambler and if the servants are to be believed addicted to opium. Emily has taken over the running of the house and she is very worried that George will end up losing the house as he has already sold off almost all of their possessions. George owes a great deal of money to His Lordship, Richard Burkewood, and in order to pay his debts agrees to marry Emily off to him. If at this point you are hoping that all of Emily's problems are over and the standard HEA is near, my advice to you would be to not purchase this book. If on the other hand, you enjoy age play and D/S and all the other wonderful things that those two categories entail, then my advice to you is to purchase this book ASAP. This is my first time reading anything by Zoe Blake but definitely not the last. She captures the nuances of this genre beautifully and I loved this book. This author definitely deserves to be placed with all the other first class writers who write great historical age play/DS books.
Laura on 07/20/2014 03:24pm
Eighteen year old Emily lives with her stepfather George, her mother having passed away two years earlier. George is to put it kindly a degenerate gambler and if the servants are to be believed addicted to opium. Emily has taken over the running of the house and she is very worried that George will end up losing the house as he has already sold off almost all of their possessions. George owes a great deal of money to His Lordship, Richard Burkewood, and in order to pay his debts agrees to marry Emily off to him. If at this point you are hoping that all of Emily's problems are over and the standard HEA is near, my advice to you would be to not purchase this book. If on the other hand, you enjoy age play and D/S and all the other wonderful things that those two categories entail, then my advice to you is to purchase this book ASAP. This is my first time reading anything by Zoe Blake but definitely not the last. She captures the nuances of this genre beautifully and I loved this book. This author definitely deserves to be placed with all the other first class writers who write great historical age play/DS books.
Bookworm Faith on 07/20/2014 02:31pm
This was one of my favorite age play stories, and I believe it to be on par with works by Carolyn Faulkner. I enjoyed reading Emmie's story, and look forward to more from this author. ** I received a copy of this book, in exchange for my honest review ** Thoughts and opinions are mine and mine alone. I would recommend this book to anyone that enjoys AP, and D/s.
Bookworm Faith on 07/20/2014 02:31pm
This was one of my favorite age play stories, and I believe it to be on par with works by Carolyn Faulkner. I enjoyed reading Emmie's story, and look forward to more from this author. ** I received a copy of this book, in exchange for my honest review ** Thoughts and opinions are mine and mine alone. I would recommend this book to anyone that enjoys AP, and D/s.
SH on 07/20/2014 12:20pm
This is a great AP story and I loved how it kept moving forward and didn't stall. Emmie has had to take on the adult burdens of her step-father's household after the death of her mother, but then Lord Burkewood takes her as a wife and life improves for her although it does take her a bit to see the truth in that. Very well written with a great plot and strong characters. Well done!
SH on 07/20/2014 12:20pm
This is a great AP story and I loved how it kept moving forward and didn't stall. Emmie has had to take on the adult burdens of her step-father's household after the death of her mother, but then Lord Burkewood takes her as a wife and life improves for her although it does take her a bit to see the truth in that. Very well written with a great plot and strong characters. Well done!
monica on 07/20/2014 08:45am
The Submission of Little Emmie Zoe Blake This story was gifted to me in exchange for an honest review. I must admit, I love this type of story. The dubious consent, the nanny, calling her husband Sir or Papa as he totally controls her. This one of course drew me in straight from the first page as Emily starts her new life, going to her new husband with only the clothes on her back and then of course loosing even those familiar things quite quickly. She has lots of spunk and doesn’t respond well to taking orders and by two nannies to boot. She is quickly shown and often reminded of who is the boss. Her poor bottom is the focus of many administrative spankings, Now her Papa has many rituals that he likes to perform on her including of course the necessary rectal temperature taking, suppositories of medicine and definitely the hated enema. He also makes her take a bottle every night at his hand, over his lap in order to directly enforce the idea of their relationship. There are many more rituals that he insists on, but I really should leave some of them for you to discover yourself as you read this story. I believe this author rates up their now with Carolyn Faulkner as one of my fav Victorian Age Play authors. I thought the story line moved alone at a great pace, the scenes were varied and easily kept my interest. It was definitely more than just a spanking story. The story and the characters all had depth to them. I know I will be reading this one again.
monica on 07/20/2014 08:45am
The Submission of Little Emmie Zoe Blake This story was gifted to me in exchange for an honest review. I must admit, I love this type of story. The dubious consent, the nanny, calling her husband Sir or Papa as he totally controls her. This one of course drew me in straight from the first page as Emily starts her new life, going to her new husband with only the clothes on her back and then of course loosing even those familiar things quite quickly. She has lots of spunk and doesn۪t respond well to taking orders and by two nannies to boot. She is quickly shown and often reminded of who is the boss. Her poor bottom is the focus of many administrative spankings, Now her Papa has many rituals that he likes to perform on her including of course the necessary rectal temperature taking, suppositories of medicine and definitely the hated enema. He also makes her take a bottle every night at his hand, over his lap in order to directly enforce the idea of their relationship. There are many more rituals that he insists on, but I really should leave some of them for you to discover yourself as you read this story. I believe this author rates up their now with Carolyn Faulkner as one of my fav Victorian Age Play authors. I thought the story line moved alone at a great pace, the scenes were varied and easily kept my interest. It was definitely more than just a spanking story. The story and the characters all had depth to them. I know I will be reading this one again.

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