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Disciplining the Maid

By: Zoe Blake
Published By: Blushing Press
Copyright: ©2014 by Blushing Books® and Zoe Blake Revised August 2016
Seventeen Chapters / 38,300 Words
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From best-selling age play author Zoe Blake comes a new glimpse into a Victorian world of complete sexual dominance and submission.

For wealthy and worldly Lord Stockton, there has been no shortage of mistresses available to grace his bed and offer him the one thing he demands - sexual submission.

But this handsome member of the Victorian ton wants something deeper. He wants the kind of total submission that only a complete innocent can offer, and the experienced mistresses fall short of giving him what he most desires - complete mastery over every facet of their lives in and out of the bedchamber.

Lily has never had a real home. Raised in an orphanage, she enters service at an early age and has managed to avoid lecherous employees and footmen to come into Lord Stockton's service as an unspoiled beauty ripe for the taking.

Lord Stockton knows Lily is the one to give him what he wants. And his offer to give her the paternal love and guidance she missed growing up in exchange for her submission is an appealing offer. But is a young maid strong enough to enter into the deeply submissive state a man like Lord Stockton demands?

To truly become his, Lily must submit every part of her body for his use, dress in immature clothing, and turn her back on adulthood forever. Even more trying, she must accept sexual pain, pleasure and punishment in doses she never thought possible to endure. Yet as Lord Stockton trains his young maid, he finds himself enduring his own vulnerability as he loses his heart to the woman he's vowed to control.

Zoe Blake's detailed descriptions of sexuality and discipline make "Disciplining the Maid" more than just an erotic read. Readers will feel as if they are in Lily's place as the sexual tension and raw emotion of her transformation comes to the most fulfilling climax you'll find in any age play novel this year.

CHAPTER ONE

The New Maid

"We run a strict household here," huffed Mrs. Oliver as she marched up the back staircase to the servant's quarters.

“Yes, Madam,” Lily replied, following the elderly housekeeper down a long narrow hallway with small doors on both sides. Mrs. Oliver opened the third door on the left and motioned for Lily to enter.

"Your wages will be eight pounds a year plus board and a tea allowance. Male visitors will not be tolerated," Mrs. Oliver warned sternly. "You are required to attend services every Sunday evening. You will have one half day off each month. We have a small household - just myself, the butler, a cook, a footman, Lord Stockton's valet of course and you."

"Yes, Madam,” Lily dutifully answered, looking about the small room containing a bed, a bureau and a spindly chair.

"The blue uniform is for morning duties, the black for afternoons while serving tea. I expect both aprons to be crisp and clean at all times."

"Yes, Madam."

"His Lordship will determine what you shall be called when you are presented to him later this afternoon."

"Yes, Madam," answered Lily automatically. She was used to being arbitrarily renamed, as it was the custom of the aristocracy to give servants the names of their predecessors so they’d not have to learn new ones. It was how she’d come to be known as Lily. Having come straight to service from an orphanage where no one had bothered calling her by her Christian name, she’d quite forgotten it

"I understand your previous positions were with families," Mrs. Oliver droned on. "This is a bachelor household. Lord Stockton keeps later hours and entertains more often, and as he is a member of the peerage, there will be many influential and powerful guests. Your discretion will be expected."

"Yes, Madam,” Lily softly replied as she placed the small valise containing all her worldly possessions on the bed. Sadly, despite her eighteen years, she had only the dress on her back, a tattered book of romantic poems and a few underthings to call her own.

"Leave your things and come along." Mrs. Oliver interrupted Lily's musings. "His Lordship insists that all staff be cleaned inside and out before beginning work in his household." Mrs. Oliver led her back down the staircase until they came to a large room. Inside was a massive enameled cast iron tub, and at the far end and along the side wall a long table covered with a rubber mat.

With quick efficiency, Mrs. Oliver turned the spigot on the tub, then crossed to the table with the rubber mat to begin to pull out various strange looking items. Watching as steam rose from the water pouring into the tub, Lily realized this must be one of those fortunate London homes with a heated water tank on the roof, which would make her maid-of-all-work position much easier.

"Alright then, off with those clothes," instructed Mrs. Oliver as she rolled up the long sleeves of her starched dress bodice. Lily stood and stared, not sure she heard the housekeeper correctly.

"I do not like repeating myself," said Mrs. Oliver with a great deal of annoyance. "Take off that rag you call a dress."

"Yes, Madam," Lily said with trepidation, not wanting to anger the formidable housekeeper on her first day. "If I could get some privacy?"

"You are in service," barked Mrs. Oliver. "There is no such thing as privacy. Now I am fully aware you were dismissed from your last position without a reference because the housekeeper thought you were too cheeky with that quick temper of yours. You were very fortunate to find yourself having met Lordship's special requirements. Had you not, you’d be out on the street. Now get out of those things!"

Lily bit her tongue, resisting the strong urge to defend herself with the truth. She’d not been dismissed from her previous position for cheekiness. She’d been dismissed from her because the lady thought her husband was taking too much notice of Lily, although if she were honest, her temper did not help. The end result was the same – she’d been turned out without a reference, which made it next to impossible to find respectable work. Lily knew Mrs. Oliver was right; she’d been fortunate indeed to find another position. And she could not afford to lose it. Resigned, Lily slowly started to unbutton her simple linen gown.

"Every stitch," said Mrs. Oliver, her patience thin. "Don't dawdle."

Lily stood in the center of the cold room as she awkwardly tried to cover her breasts with one arm and between her legs with the other. Mrs. Oliver, ignoring the young maid’s obvious embarrassment, motioned for her to walk over to the long table.

"Up on the table, on your knees," Mrs. Oliver instructed.

"Why?" asked Lily, horrified.

"Don't question your betters! Up on the table!” Mrs. Oliver grabbed Lily by the upper arm and pushed her forward. Lily climbed up and sat back on her haunches, still trying to shield her breasts.

"Down on your elbows, bum in the air!” Mrs. Oliver pressed on Lily's upper back between her shoulder blades to force her into position. "Do I need to strap you down or are you going to behave?"

Lily could not imagine why she would need to be strapped down. "I will...I will behave,” she answered hesitantly. With a decisive nod, Mrs. Oliver moved to stand behind her as Lily twisted her torso to glance over her shoulder.

"Eyes straight ahead,” Mrs. Oliver barked as she opened a jar of ointment. She swooped two fingers in, coating them. Pressing both thumbs into the crease between Lily's pale globes she forced her bottom cheeks open. Lily, surprised at the unexpected contact, screamed and pitched forward. Leaning on her hip and tucking her knees into her chest she stared at Mrs. Oliver with wide, startled eyes.

"Get back into position!" Mrs. Oliver snapped.

"Why did you touch me there?” Lily asked in alarm, clutching her knees to her chest. “What are you going to do?"

"I have already told you," snapped Mrs. Oliver who had clearly run out of patience. "Lord Stockton demands his staff be thoroughly cleaned inside and out. Now get back into position!"

"But what are you going to do?" Lily pressed, feeling hot tears prick her eyes. She could not afford to start off on the wrong footing with the housekeeper, but she had to know.

"I am going to give you a nice soapy enema to clean your insides,” Mrs. Oliver stated, clearly not used to having to explain herself to subordinates.

"But I don't want one,” whined Lily in a small voice.

"You have no choice," Mrs. Oliver said with finality. "It's this or the sack."

Lily hesitated for only a moment before tearfully getting back on her knees. Mrs. Oliver was right. She had no choice. She flinched when her butt cheeks were once again roughly spread open. A sob burst from Lily's lips at the unwelcome sensation of Mrs. Oliver's ointment-coated fingers circling her small puckered entrance. Lily clenched her fists against her mouth, stifling a frightened scream.

"Arch your back more," barked Mrs. Oliver. "Push your bum higher." She placed her left hand on the small of Lily's back and pushed down, forcing the younger woman’s ass up. "I want you to bear down as I push my fingers into your bottom hole. I need to loosen you up for the nozzle." Having no idea what Mrs. Oliver meant by bearing down and frightened by the prospect of some object being pushed into her body, Lily began to shake in fear.

She felt the blunt tip of Mrs. Oliver's finger as it slowly pressed against her resisting rosebud. Squirming, Lily could feel the sensitive ring give under the unrelenting pressure as Mrs. Oliver's finger pressed in to the second knuckle. The sensation was a strange combination of slippery coolness from the ointment and a stinging burn as her muscles were forced to accept the intrusion. When Lily squirmed in an instinctive attempt to expel the unwanted digit, Mrs. Oliver's response was an unexpected and painful open palm to Lily's exposed bare bottom. With a cry, Lily collapsed flat on the table, dislodging Mrs. Oliver's finger.

"Oh, you naughty girl," exclaimed Mrs. Oliver. "Get back into position!" Another bare-handed smack to her bottom had Lily scrambling to get back onto her knees. "Get back into position, now!" Mrs. Oliver relentlessly peppered Lily's poor bottom with smacks until a sobbing Lily was once again on her knees.

"I'm sorry,” wailed Lily as the distinct outline of the housekeeper’s handprint bloomed across the expanse of one pale cheek and upper thigh. "I'm sorry. I'll try harder. Please don't sack me!"

"I am finished with being nice and gentle with you,” announced Mrs. Oliver. "You are being a naughty girl who does not deserve all the patience I have shown." The head housekeeper’s words only made Lily cry harder. Mrs. Oliver ruthlessly grabbed Lily's butt cheeks and stretched them wide, forcing the small puckered hole to tightly clench. Without applying more ointment, Mrs. Oliver viciously pushed against Lily's back passage using two fingers this time, allowing Lily's cheeks to close over her fisted hand as she twisted and pushed her fingers deeper into Lily's bowels, pressing her left hand against one of Lily's burning cheeks for purchase.

Lily was in agony; the skin on her bottom tightened and burned as her buttocks began to swell from the quick but fierce spanking she had just received. She could feel Mrs. Oliver's fingers deep inside her bum as her muscles stretched and clenched trying to accommodate and expel the intrusion all at once.

"Oh! Please, that hurts!" Lily exclaimed trying to tuck her hips under to avoid the invasive fingers.

"Stop shifting around or I will give your bum another spanking!" Mrs. Oliver pumped her fingers in and out of Lily's tight passage, twisting and turning them to help spread the ointment. Lily let out a plaintive whine as she strained not to shift around. Satisfied, the ointment was spread sufficiently, Mrs. Oliver replaced her fingers with the tip of the enema nozzle. Lily started to cry when she felt the hard, cold nozzle begin its penetration. Despite its tapered edge, it scraped along her sensitive insides, her tight rosebud stinging and stretching as the nozzle neared its wider base.

"Please go more slowly,” pleaded Lily, breathing hard through the discomfort.

"I do not have all day for this, missy!" Mrs. Oliver angrily shoved the final inch into Lily's bottom causing the poor girl to yelp in fright and pain as she buried her face in her hands. Lily could sense movement behind her as Mrs. Oliver prepared the enema bag. There was a tug on the nozzle as Mrs. Oliver connected the long tube that would push the hot soapy water into Lily's bowels, then there was a long, torturous pause before Lily heard a click. Moments later, warm water pushed into her bottom. She held her breath, trying to become accustomed to the strange sensation. As the water continued to flow, Lily could feel her abdomen expanding even as her muscles began to contract and cramp amid the growing pressure. Lily groaned as she rocked from side to side, trying to alleviate the pain. Her belly slowly distended as the unrelenting flow of soapy water continued.

"One more quart," announced Mrs. Oliver ominously.

"No. I can't," pleaded Lily in her humiliation. "It hurts. Please no more."

"There is plenty of nastiness around London these days," Mrs. Oliver stated emphatically. We need to clean it all out of you before you start in Lord Stockton’s service." She opened Lily's cheeks and pushed the nozzle in more securely. Lily groaned as her belly continued to expand as wave after wave of punishing cramps wracked her body. Her natural response of clenching her buttocks with each punishing cramp only caused the soreness from the spanking to further radiate across her red, swollen cheeks. Lily's skin glowed with a fresh, sheen of sweat as she struggled with the pain.

"Very good!" Mrs. Oliver's voice cut through Lily's haze of misery. “A full two quarts. You stay put as I check on your bath." Mrs. Oliver detached the tube from the enema bag and let it dangle between Lily's legs. After what seemed like hours, she returned to Lily's side, placing a restraining hand on Lily’s lower back as she firmly grasped the nozzle.

"Deep breath and bear down."

As the nozzle popped out of her abused, puckered hole, Lily struggled to clench her cheeks to hold in the offending liquid, so as not to embarrass herself any further. Mrs. Oliver helped her gingerly climb down from the rubber mat table and gestured to the water closet just off to the side. Lily returned to the main room afterwards feeling wrung out and sore and looking forward to sinking into the bath. As she headed in that direction, a hand on her upper arm stopped her.

"Not so fast," admonished Mrs. Oliver. "We still have to rinse you out." Lily's knees buckled as Mrs. Oliver dragged her back to the table. Once again, Lily felt cold and exposed as she was forced to kneel on the table, slick from her own sweat and tears.

"Now that you know what to expect you can help out," Mrs. Oliver instructed. "Reach back and open your butt cheeks nice and wide so I can push in the nozzle. Quickly now. We do not have all day."

Tears fell from Lily's already swollen eyes as she reached back and pulled open her own cheeks. Being forced her to participate in the violation of her own body made the whole thing even more intolerable, but she had no choice. It was this job or the streets. After suffering through a second warm water rinse enema, Lily was finally allowed to sink into the soothing bath. Mrs. Oliver handed her a bathing cloth and some Castile soap. Lily – being only used to cold water hip baths - had never been in a tub large enough to submerge her whole body. It felt like pure heaven, but Lily knew Mrs. Oliver would be displeased if she lingered, so she quickly lathered up the bathing cloth and vigorously began to scrub her arms, legs and face in a way she instinctively knew would make Mrs. Oliver happy.

"Your hair too. There is a pitcher of vinegar and rose water to your right."

Lily dutifully washed her hair. When she was finished, Mrs. Oliver approached the tub. "Stand up." Lily obeyed even though she felt self-conscience as Mrs. Oliver gestured for her to turn around.

"Bend over and grasp the edge of the tub," said Mrs. Oliver in a no nonsense tone.

Fearing the worse, Lily whimpered as she dutifully followed Mrs. Oliver's instructions. She felt the harsh scrape of the bathing cloth as it was forced between her legs. Lily cried out and tried to move away which earned her a stinging smack to her naked buttock.

"Stay still," Mrs. Oliver admonished as she scrubbed Lily's cunny and bottom hole. By the time Lily was permitted to exit the tub she was numb and worn out. Mrs. Oliver wrapped her in a course dressing gown and placed her in front of a small fireplace for her hair to dry.

"Nice and clean,” Mrs. Oliver beamed proudly. "We will do this once a week on Sunday to keep you that way. Now stay put till I come and get you."

Mrs. Oliver left, leaving Lily to ponder what she had just learned. Believing the enema and intimate scrubbing to be isolated incidents had been the only thing that had gotten her through them. How could she possibly go through this every week? She then reminded herself that Lord Stockton paid an exorbitant two pounds a year over the standard salary and an extra two pounds was a fortune she could not afford to turn away from, no matter the cost to her pride.

R on 07/16/2016 12:23pm
enjoyed very much!
R on 07/16/2016 12:23pm
enjoyed very much!
La Crimson Femme on 10/25/2014 03:35pm
Ms. Black is the current go to author for delicious Victorian Ageplay. In this latest story, Lily is a slender petite maid looking for a job. She's been accosted in her previous employment. As an orphan, she possesses no safety net to fall back on when times are rough. Fortunately for her, she's hired on by Lord Stockton. Lord Stockton is a man who will never marry. He doesn't want a vapid wife driving him to drink. Besides, his particular taste in women treated as young children or babies is not something aristocrat women will stomach easily. When Lord Stockton sees Lily, courtesy of his knowing housekeeper, he believes he's found his next mistress. The ageplay in this story is fabulous. Lily is treated like a young child. She's also babied and taught some naught sexual acts to please her new daddy. For a young woman who's never experienced a loving and supported childhood, she doesn't know how to take it all in. It's heaven to be taken care of instead of having to work from dawn to dust cleaning after others. She does still have to take orders even if they are a bit different than being a maid. Ms. Black's ageplay scenes are spanky worthy hot. The passages are best bookmarked for frequent re-reads and personal "alone time" enjoyment. Between the diapers, bottles, spankings and forced sexual contact, it may cause an ageplay lover to swoon in delight. Or they may expire from an episode of sexual frenzy caused by certain humiliations suffered by little Lily. Ms. Black does go into detail of how Lily will be trained. The depicts still stay on the other side of the line from graphic masturbation fantasies. It's enough to allow the reader to supplement the arousing framework and visualize Lily's decent into childhood. This story is more than just ageplay scene after another. There is a semblance of plot with a believable conflict which causes an unplanned separation between Lord Stockton and his lovely Lily. This separation works for an expected happily ever ending. Ms. Black is a must read author whom I recommend to all ageplay lovers.
La Crimson Femme on 10/25/2014 03:35pm
"Ms. Black is the current go to author for delicious Victorian Ageplay. In this latest story, Lily is a slender petite maid looking for a job. She's been accosted in her previous employment. As an orphan, she possesses no safety net to fall back on when times are rough. Fortunately for her, she's hired on by Lord Stockton. Lord Stockton is a man who will never marry. He doesn't want a vapid wife driving him to drink. Besides, his particular taste in women treated as young children or babies is not something aristocrat women will stomach easily. When Lord Stockton sees Lily, courtesy of his knowing housekeeper, he believes he's found his next mistress. The ageplay in this story is fabulous. Lily is treated like a young child. She's also babied and taught some naught sexual acts to please her new daddy. For a young woman who's never experienced a loving and supported childhood, she doesn't know how to take it all in. It's heaven to be taken care of instead of having to work from dawn to dust cleaning after others. She does still have to take orders even if they are a bit different than being a maid. Ms. Black's ageplay scenes are spanky worthy hot. The passages are best bookmarked for frequent re-reads and personal ""alone time"" enjoyment. Between the diapers, bottles, spankings and forced sexual contact, it may cause an ageplay lover to swoon in delight. Or they may expire from an episode of sexual frenzy caused by certain humiliations suffered by little Lily. Ms. Black does go into detail of how Lily will be trained. The depicts still stay on the other side of the line from graphic masturbation fantasies. It's enough to allow the reader to supplement the arousing framework and visualize Lily's decent into childhood. This story is more than just ageplay scene after another. There is a semblance of plot with a believable conflict which causes an unplanned separation between Lord Stockton and his lovely Lily. This separation works for an expected happily ever ending. Ms. Black is a must read author whom I recommend to all ageplay lovers."
Breanna Hayse on 10/12/2014 10:45pm
Nicely written and well researched! The style was indeed harsh, however, that 'sense' is appropriate for the time period and location in which it was written. I am excited to see what other delights Ms. Blake is going to produce!
Breanna Hayse on 10/12/2014 10:45pm
Nicely written and well researched! The style was indeed harsh, however, that 'sense' is appropriate for the time period and location in which it was written. I am excited to see what other delights Ms. Blake is going to produce!
Margaret Corcoran on 09/30/2014 01:35pm
A lovely age play story about Emily the maid becoming Little Emmie. Ms Blake does it again. This is the second story I have read from this author and she did not disappoint. Her characters are well rounded and the scenes are believable. You can really see what is happening by the wonderful descriptions.
Margaret Corcoran on 09/30/2014 01:35pm
A lovely age play story about Emily the maid becoming Little Emmie. Ms Blake does it again. This is the second story I have read from this author and she did not disappoint. Her characters are well rounded and the scenes are believable. You can really see what is happening by the wonderful descriptions.
TEH on 09/19/2014 01:16pm
While I typically like AP novels, I found this one to be disturbing. It seemed, like so many others, as though the story was written around the scenes. It was harsh, not very tender, and lacked anything different than seen before. The psychological aspect was also written- and read- before, just reworded and placed in a different time and place. I would not say it was 'the' age play novel of the year, but it had some potential.
TEH on 09/19/2014 01:16pm
While I typically like AP novels, I found this one to be disturbing. It seemed, like so many others, as though the story was written around the scenes. It was harsh, not very tender, and lacked anything different than seen before. The psychological aspect was also written- and read- before, just reworded and placed in a different time and place. I would not say it was 'the' age play novel of the year, but it had some potential.
anon on 09/19/2014 11:23am
Lily is a young, orphan girl who is hired as a maid for Lord Stockton’s household, but is immediately prepared to be the lord’s “little”. Stockton delights in training her to please him in his bed and her nursery. Lily accepts her role realizing, in this time period, that she really has little choice. Luckily, she finds she enjoys being a “little”. Her body enjoys the things Stockton does to it. Add to that, Stockton realizes he has fallen helplessly in love with his little girl and marries her. It all works out happily ever after to the delight of all. Blake did a good job of walking the reader through the mindset of the time period a so the reader can easily accept Stockton's method of training. I feel it is a much better story than Blake’s Submission.
anon on 09/19/2014 11:23am
Lily is a young, orphan girl who is hired as a maid for Lord Stockton۪s household, but is immediately prepared to be the lord۪s little۝. Stockton delights in training her to please him in his bed and her nursery. Lily accepts her role realizing, in this time period, that she really has little choice. Luckily, she finds she enjoys being a little۝. Her body enjoys the things Stockton does to it. Add to that, Stockton realizes he has fallen helplessly in love with his little girl and marries her. It all works out happily ever after to the delight of all. Blake did a good job of walking the reader through the mindset of the time period a so the reader can easily accept Stockton's method of training. I feel it is a much better story than Blake۪s Submission.
K Tyler on 09/19/2014 12:56am
This was a different spin on age play. Lilly catches the notice of the Lord of the house who is use to getting whatever he desires. He decides he desires Lilly who is not use to the attention she receives as she was a former orphan and soaks up the new specialized attention like a sponge. This was an entertaining read.
K Tyler on 09/19/2014 12:56am
This was a different spin on age play. Lilly catches the notice of the Lord of the house who is use to getting whatever he desires. He decides he desires Lilly who is not use to the attention she receives as she was a former orphan and soaks up the new specialized attention like a sponge. This was an entertaining read.
Marybeth on 09/16/2014 12:37pm
Wow, what a story. This is an ageplay story, but there is consent in this one. I found that I liked knowing that Lily was given the choice of being with Lord Stockton. Lily starts off in Lord Stockton’s house as a maid. On her first day there, she is given two enemas, to wash out the nastiness of the London streets, and a bath where everything is washed. By the time the bath ended, Lily was exhausted. But, the next day she starts as Lord Stockton’s maid. We learn that Lord Stockton is interested in having Lily as his little one. He starts right away with training her. Eventually, there is a HEA, but there are trials and tribulations on the way there. This is a wonderful story. I really like to read ageplay and this is very good. Zoe Black has taken these stories to a new height. I can’t wait to read what she has for us next! I give this 5 stars!
Marybeth on 09/16/2014 12:37pm
Wow, what a story. This is an ageplay story, but there is consent in this one. I found that I liked knowing that Lily was given the choice of being with Lord Stockton. Lily starts off in Lord Stockton۪s house as a maid. On her first day there, she is given two enemas, to wash out the nastiness of the London streets, and a bath where everything is washed. By the time the bath ended, Lily was exhausted. But, the next day she starts as Lord Stockton۪s maid. We learn that Lord Stockton is interested in having Lily as his little one. He starts right away with training her. Eventually, there is a HEA, but there are trials and tribulations on the way there. This is a wonderful story. I really like to read ageplay and this is very good. Zoe Black has taken these stories to a new height. I can۪t wait to read what she has for us next! I give this 5 stars!
Ella on 09/14/2014 10:26am
I was so happily surprised by this book! I found myself feeling exactly what Lily felt, and was surprised to find myself so engrossed in this book. I could not put it down, and found myself pondering some of the scenes to the point that I had to reread it the next day because I was just loving replaying the scenes in my head so much. Lily is sweet, and a complete innocent. She is also an orphan, and has never had attention showed to her. It is this attention, the desire to be noticed, that allows her to come to grips with all that her employer/Papa is asking of her. In his need to control her, he does not realize how much he is meeting her needs to be loved in cared for, because she never has been. I simply loved this book, and will be reading it again.
Ella on 09/14/2014 10:26am
I was so happily surprised by this book! I found myself feeling exactly what Lily felt, and was surprised to find myself so engrossed in this book. I could not put it down, and found myself pondering some of the scenes to the point that I had to reread it the next day because I was just loving replaying the scenes in my head so much. Lily is sweet, and a complete innocent. She is also an orphan, and has never had attention showed to her. It is this attention, the desire to be noticed, that allows her to come to grips with all that her employer/Papa is asking of her. In his need to control her, he does not realize how much he is meeting her needs to be loved in cared for, because she never has been. I simply loved this book, and will be reading it again.
Katy Beth McKee on 09/13/2014 06:53pm
Lord Rand is from an era where he feels that what he wants is what he gets. Lily isn't in a position to complain. There starts a feeling of harshness and being used but there seems to be a shifting as the story progresses. And somehow you get the feeling the his Lordship is just as caught in their new life as Lily is.
Katy Beth McKee on 09/13/2014 06:53pm
Lord Rand is from an era where he feels that what he wants is what he gets. Lily isn't in a position to complain. There starts a feeling of harshness and being used but there seems to be a shifting as the story progresses. And somehow you get the feeling the his Lordship is just as caught in their new life as Lily is.
SH on 09/12/2014 09:04pm
I always like a good AP story, whether contemporary or Victorian and I liked this story but not as much as I liked 'The Submission of Little Emmie' for a couple of reasons. I felt at first that Lily really had no choice but to accept what Lord Stockton was offering, although as the story progressed we did learn that she had fallen in love with him and him with her. I also really would have enjoyed some more character development and back story for all of the principle characters involved, it would have made it possible to have a better connection with them. There is a very good story here, I just really think it could have been so much more.
SH on 09/12/2014 09:04pm
I always like a good AP story, whether contemporary or Victorian and I liked this story but not as much as I liked 'The Submission of Little Emmie' for a couple of reasons. I felt at first that Lily really had no choice but to accept what Lord Stockton was offering, although as the story progressed we did learn that she had fallen in love with him and him with her. I also really would have enjoyed some more character development and back story for all of the principle characters involved, it would have made it possible to have a better connection with them. There is a very good story here, I just really think it could have been so much more.
Laurel Lasky on 09/12/2014 12:14pm
This was a fascinating view of age play. Lily was a maid in lord Stockton house. It became apparent that The Lord wanted Lilly as his little girl/mistress. Lily was eager to please as she had nowhere to go so she chose to stay. The discipline was harsh by Lilly learned to love her Lord. This was a well thought out story and well written. I won't give out anymore details so there will be surprises.
Laurel Lasky on 09/12/2014 12:14pm
This was a fascinating view of age play. Lily was a maid in lord Stockton house. It became apparent that The Lord wanted Lilly as his little girl/mistress. Lily was eager to please as she had nowhere to go so she chose to stay. The discipline was harsh by Lilly learned to love her Lord. This was a well thought out story and well written. I won't give out anymore details so there will be surprises.
Redrabbitt on 09/12/2014 11:53am
Once again Zoe Blake has not disappointed! With another fantastic and powerful erotic Victorian age-play story. Lily was orphaned at a young age and has never known what a loving home or situation was like. She went from an orphanage of hand-me-down rags to servitude as a maid in a home and then kicked out of the house when the wife fear her husband was taking notice of the maid, and refused her references. Brought into the household of Lord Stockton by his head housekeeper, it doesn't take long for Little Lily to catch Lord Stockton's attention, recognizing that she is the perfect submissive. She goes from maid to his little girl as he starts training this submissive to his bidding. He has her fitted in the finest clothing for his "little one" and a nursery with toys and lessons with a Nanny. This story contains both non-consensual and consensual moments that include lots of discipline, explicit sex, age-play, medical play, and ends with a HEA.
Redrabbitt on 09/12/2014 11:53am
"Once again Zoe Blake has not disappointed! With another fantastic and powerful erotic Victorian age-play story. Lily was orphaned at a young age and has never known what a loving home or situation was like. She went from an orphanage of hand-me-down rags to servitude as a maid in a home and then kicked out of the house when the wife fear her husband was taking notice of the maid, and refused her references. Brought into the household of Lord Stockton by his head housekeeper, it doesn't take long for Little Lily to catch Lord Stockton's attention, recognizing that she is the perfect submissive. She goes from maid to his little girl as he starts training this submissive to his bidding. He has her fitted in the finest clothing for his ""little one"" and a nursery with toys and lessons with a Nanny. This story contains both non-consensual and consensual moments that include lots of discipline, explicit sex, age-play, medical play, and ends with a HEA. "
Meg on 09/12/2014 10:27am
This story is about Lily, a girl raised in an orphanage, who enters the service of Lord Stockton as a maid. It is instantly apparent that the housekeeper, Mrs. Oliver, has actually procured the young girl as a possible ‘little one’ for the Lord’s sexual pleasure. From her first moment in the house, Lily learns that she either accepts the fact that she is to obey or walks out the door to be penniless and homeless. She is spanked and given her first of what she is told will be weekly enemas and then bathed within a few moments of her arrival. The first meeting of her new employer doesn’t go well, earning her the first of many lessons in obedience and sexual submission. Lily knows that to protest or disagree with anything asked of her means nothing short of unemployment and she has absolutely no where to go. Lord Stockton forces her to ask for her discipline as well as ask that he use her body any way he wishes. Despite her misgivings, the forced servitude brings out her submissive feelings. She discovers that discipline is a form of caring after all. as she begins to fall in love with him. With the arrival of Mrs. Temple, her new nanny, she learns that privacy is not an option for her as the woman actively participates in training the Lord’s little one in whatever he desires whether it be how to read and write or how to service his sexual desires. This book includes spankings and sexual training that is sometimes harsh. I have no problem with either of those, but, like in her first book, I found myself questioning the true connection this author claims her two characters have. How much in love can they be if she runs away only to return to him when she realizes that she is better off giving herself to the man she knows versus the ones she would have to if homeless? She decides that she will stay and accept whatever affection she is given as well as whatever discipline is required for her disobedience. Even though this could be considered consent, I can only see it as very questionable. Though it ends with the Lord making a commitment to Lily, even that was done without her knowledge or consent. Did he decide to give her his name because he truly loved her or because she might not return the next time she ran away? While I truly enjoy the dynamic of an age-play relationship as well as enjoy spanking books, even when those scenes are explicit or harsh, I found this book to be rather short as well as containing nothing much more than spankings or sexual service. I would have enjoyed it if Ms. Blake had spent a bit more time with character and plot development. I do believe that those who liked Ms Blake's first book will enjoy this one as well.
Meg on 09/12/2014 10:27am
This story is about Lily, a girl raised in an orphanage, who enters the service of Lord Stockton as a maid. It is instantly apparent that the housekeeper, Mrs. Oliver, has actually procured the young girl as a possible little one۪ for the Lord۪s sexual pleasure. From her first moment in the house, Lily learns that she either accepts the fact that she is to obey or walks out the door to be penniless and homeless. She is spanked and given her first of what she is told will be weekly enemas and then bathed within a few moments of her arrival. The first meeting of her new employer doesn۪t go well, earning her the first of many lessons in obedience and sexual submission. Lily knows that to protest or disagree with anything asked of her means nothing short of unemployment and she has absolutely no where to go. Lord Stockton forces her to ask for her discipline as well as ask that he use her body any way he wishes. Despite her misgivings, the forced servitude brings out her submissive feelings. She discovers that discipline is a form of caring after all. as she begins to fall in love with him. With the arrival of Mrs. Temple, her new nanny, she learns that privacy is not an option for her as the woman actively participates in training the Lord۪s little one in whatever he desires whether it be how to read and write or how to service his sexual desires. This book includes spankings and sexual training that is sometimes harsh. I have no problem with either of those, but, like in her first book, I found myself questioning the true connection this author claims her two characters have. How much in love can they be if she runs away only to return to him when she realizes that she is better off giving herself to the man she knows versus the ones she would have to if homeless? She decides that she will stay and accept whatever affection she is given as well as whatever discipline is required for her disobedience. Even though this could be considered consent, I can only see it as very questionable. Though it ends with the Lord making a commitment to Lily, even that was done without her knowledge or consent. Did he decide to give her his name because he truly loved her or because she might not return the next time she ran away? While I truly enjoy the dynamic of an age-play relationship as well as enjoy spanking books, even when those scenes are explicit or harsh, I found this book to be rather short as well as containing nothing much more than spankings or sexual service. I would have enjoyed it if Ms. Blake had spent a bit more time with character and plot development. I do believe that those who liked Ms Blake's first book will enjoy this one as well.
Southern Lady on 09/11/2014 09:48am
A Maid’s Tale Of Growing Servitude is the title for this review of Disciplining Of the Maid by Zoe Blake. The journey from an innocent maid to a coerced subject for a capricious role-play adult little girl/papa character. Unlike his usual fare of cultured adult women who had experienced the world already in her past. Lily his conquest in the book is still in the buddy stage of her sexuality and has innocence like a dawn’s mist. As the book continues a steady dose of spanking, anal plugs and enemas wear down the naïve girl’s resistance and his intentions head dead right to her last and forbidden rosebud orifice. I marveled at the author’s ability to so beautifully write this escape from the hum drum, but do it with class and without vulgar. I think you will be glad you too went on this journey into tasteful age play genre which took the time to develop the psychological nature of the games.
Southern Lady on 09/11/2014 09:48am
A Maid۪s Tale Of Growing Servitude is the title for this review of Disciplining Of the Maid by Zoe Blake. The journey from an innocent maid to a coerced subject for a capricious role-play adult little girl/papa character. Unlike his usual fare of cultured adult women who had experienced the world already in her past. Lily his conquest in the book is still in the buddy stage of her sexuality and has innocence like a dawn۪s mist. As the book continues a steady dose of spanking, anal plugs and enemas wear down the nave girl۪s resistance and his intentions head dead right to her last and forbidden rosebud orifice. I marveled at the author۪s ability to so beautifully write this escape from the hum drum, but do it with class and without vulgar. I think you will be glad you too went on this journey into tasteful age play genre which took the time to develop the psychological nature of the games.
Kate on 09/10/2014 08:51pm
I really enjoyed the beginning. Lily is thrown in to a situation that is completely foreign to her and reacts accordingly. However, I never felt any love from 'Papa' and found the ending rushed and forced for no particular reason.
Kate on 09/10/2014 08:51pm
I really enjoyed the beginning. Lily is thrown in to a situation that is completely foreign to her and reacts accordingly. However, I never felt any love from 'Papa' and found the ending rushed and forced for no particular reason.
monica on 09/10/2014 03:52pm
Disciplining The Maid Zoe Blake This story was gifted to me in exchange for an honest review. Lily was lucky to get a new job, she had left her previous one with no reference when she refused the physical advances from the man of the house. She soon learns there are rules and regulations for employment in the Stockton household and is subjected to a thorough cleaning –inside and out. Soon she catches the eye of Lord Stockton and he is determined to make her into his little one. What follows next is truly a wonderful story with a mixture of all things necessary for a great read. There is an innocent girl, who is eager to please, a man that is Dominant and knows his way around the bedroom and is more than eager to engage with a spanking or two. A man that likes to make poor Lily actually talk about all the embarrassing things that are being done to her in detail. He is a man that will treat her like the little girl that she is meant to be complete with her own new bedroom, new toys and plenty of age appropriate dresses. She will have plenty of baths, spankings, and enemas and of course a very thorough introduction into the world of lovemaking as Lord Stockton primes her to be his little one. I was captivated by this story from the first page. I thought the entire thing was well thought out and excellently written. I enjoyed the humiliation that she was feeling throughout her introduction into this lifestyle and thought that they character of Mrs Oliver supplied a necessary and perfect companion to Lord Stockton. I would base this story a 5/5 and think that for a BDSM historical novel it hit all the right spots.
monica on 09/10/2014 03:52pm
Disciplining The Maid Zoe Blake This story was gifted to me in exchange for an honest review. Lily was lucky to get a new job, she had left her previous one with no reference when she refused the physical advances from the man of the house. She soon learns there are rules and regulations for employment in the Stockton household and is subjected to a thorough cleaning inside and out. Soon she catches the eye of Lord Stockton and he is determined to make her into his little one. What follows next is truly a wonderful story with a mixture of all things necessary for a great read. There is an innocent girl, who is eager to please, a man that is Dominant and knows his way around the bedroom and is more than eager to engage with a spanking or two. A man that likes to make poor Lily actually talk about all the embarrassing things that are being done to her in detail. He is a man that will treat her like the little girl that she is meant to be complete with her own new bedroom, new toys and plenty of age appropriate dresses. She will have plenty of baths, spankings, and enemas and of course a very thorough introduction into the world of lovemaking as Lord Stockton primes her to be his little one. I was captivated by this story from the first page. I thought the entire thing was well thought out and excellently written. I enjoyed the humiliation that she was feeling throughout her introduction into this lifestyle and thought that they character of Mrs Oliver supplied a necessary and perfect companion to Lord Stockton. I would base this story a 5/5 and think that for a BDSM historical novel it hit all the right spots.
Bookworm Faith on 09/09/2014 07:49pm
Excellent read! After reading The Submission of little Emmie, I was looking forward to more works from Zoe Blake. Disciplining the maid did not disappoint! If anything, I liked this one even more! I liked the chemistry and relationship flow between Lily and Lord Stockton. (Papa) It was wonderfully well written, with great descriptive detail. I would recommend this book, and I look forward to more from the talented Zoe Blake!
Bookworm Faith on 09/09/2014 07:49pm
Excellent read! After reading The Submission of little Emmie, I was looking forward to more works from Zoe Blake. Disciplining the maid did not disappoint! If anything, I liked this one even more! I liked the chemistry and relationship flow between Lily and Lord Stockton. (Papa) It was wonderfully well written, with great descriptive detail. I would recommend this book, and I look forward to more from the talented Zoe Blake!

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