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The Rancher and The Bad Girl

By: Kira Barcelo
Published By: Blushing Press
Copyright: �2014 by Blushing Books� and Kira Barcelo
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Like any other mail order bride, Melanie Cranford is looking for a new life and adventure, hoping to find it with rancher Reeve Larson. She didn't expect the cowboy to be so good-looking--or so strict! Reeve is pleasantly surprised to find he got more than he bargained for with Melanie, though she's a beautiful woman who's often in need of being taken in hand.

But Reeve doesn't know that Melanie is harboring a secret about her past, one that threatens to shatter the life they are building together in that frontier Montana town. Further complicating matters is Melanie's proud older sister, Olivia, and the brooding, tough guy cattle rustler detective, Forest, who's smitten by her.

Will Reeve find out the truth about his bride and send her back East, or will he see her as she sees him--through the eyes of love?

Chapter One

About the only thing he knew about Melanie Cranford was that she was pretty�if the picture in the magazine advertisement, in fact, was to be believed. Reeve Larson wasn't certain what was guaranteed in those ads, including the young lady's willingness to make her home with him on his ranch, thousands of miles away from everything she knew.

She was pretty� and from Maryland. One of those Eastern women, and from Baltimore, a city, no less. He recalled as he hopped off his wagon that she was twenty-three years old. He was thirty-two, but a woman who hadn't found a husband by her age gave him pause.

Usually, more often than not, that woman could be counted on to be trouble. Particularly a good-looking one like that.

Don't be so quick to write the girl off. Mae's words echoed in his head like a child's game chant. I'm older and wise than you are, Reeve Larson. You might find your one true love stepping off that train.

Reeve grinned and stepped onto the train platform. That advice coming from a lady who claimed not to believe in, as she said, romance and all those other fairytales. Evidently, she did believe in it, at least a small sliver of it, when it came to her friend, the young rancher, finding a suitable wife.

The train, having traveled from the Northeastern half of the country, was due to come in at any minute. That didn't matter. Everybody in Garner Falls knew the trains were notoriously late, especially, oddly enough, those delivering mail order brides.

He didn't like having his time wasted, and he liked it even less when he had work to do. Albeit, that was always. When didn't Reeve have work to do?

But there was more than that going on. He was functioning on a very small amount of sleep and almost as much food, since he'd barely slept or eaten in the past day or so. With the minutes ticking closer to Melanie's arrival, he felt more and more jittery, like a kid looking forward to getting a present.

From a distance, he heard the familiar wail of an approaching train. The sound tugged a deep breath out of him, the pretense of being calm and cool, despite the agitated rhythm of his heart.

What are you getting so excited about, he chided himself.

Melanie Cranford was a woman. Just a woman. He'd paid for her to come all that way. He'd as good as purchased her from that ad. She knew he had land and a ranch to run. She was coming to find a husband and a home. It was a business arrangement, nothing more.

Still, he found himself adjusting his hat on his head, and fixing the collar of his checkered shirt. Reeve looked down at his boots, which he'd cleaned some and polished the best he could.

Presentable, I suppose. Not great, but he'd make a good impression. Or so he hoped.

She had to make a good impression on him, as well. Didn't she? He could very well find her to be ornery and impossible, at which point he would send her on the first train headed right back to her hometown, let her family deal with her.

Or� the woman who stepped off that train could turn out to be a good wife. They would both find out soon enough.

Watching the train slow down along its tracks, chugging and spewing out puffs of white smoke, he licked his lips. The Montana sun sure was beating down that afternoon, hotter than usual for a spring day. Reeve was looking forward to the end of the day, to the cool of the evening, and to sleeping next to the soft, warm body of a woman.

Something that wouldn't be happening right away, not until after the wedding. If there was one. It wouldn't be proper until he put a ring on the lady's finger and she promised to love and obey, and all that.

Both men and women stepped down from the train once it came to a grinding stop. Reeve had noticed a slow but steady influx of women coming to Garner Falls. The ranchers, sheepherders, farmers, and the men employed by them all, had begun bringing prospective brides in from the east, both the Northern and Southern states. Basically, wherever there were available females, unlike Garner Falls, which had a sparse population of women. It seemed the majority of them worked for Mae.

Maybe she'd decided against coming. Maybe, at the last moment, Melanie had chosen to stay in Baltimore. Occasionally, that happened, or so he'd heard. Fear of the unknown, of traveling thousands of miles to the West�a world unto itself�kept some women from venturing out and keeping their end of the bargain. Reeve swallowed, tasting dust and grime off the train and his own impending disappointment.

But then his bride appeared. Reeve blinked, asking himself if that was the same girl, but sure enough, that was. The picture published in the ad hadn't done her justice. Wearing a dress the palest shade of pink, she looked daintier and more petite than he'd pictured her. Her blondish-brown hair peeked out from under her bonnet and her mouth was pert, the lips full.

The tightening in his belly was back. So was his dry throat, back with a vengeance. Squaring his shoulders, he approached his prospective bride.

"I think you're looking for me." He was making a statement, not posing a question. And he'd asked it brusquely, just so he would appear to her in control of himself, courteous but stern.

All that bravado nearly flew out the window when she whirled around and faced him. Those greenish-hazel eyes made a beeline to meet his gaze.

"Reeve Larson?" she asked.

Was that her voice? He'd expected something chirpier coming from that slender, little woman, rather than the smoky, lilting voice that reminded him again of his bedroom.

"Yep. That's me. And you're Melanie Cranford." He allowed himself a half smile, remembering his manners and respectfully removing his hat. "Nice to have you home."

"Thank you. Nice to be home."

Her smile seemed sincere enough. He noticed her stare raked over him from head to foot. Was she inspecting him? As discreetly as possible, he also permitted himself to take in the view, as much as he could fit into that stolen moment, before he reached for her bag. "I'll take that. That all you have, Melanie?"

"That's it. I didn't bring very much with me."

"Oh. Well, all right. Come this way, with me."

Turning on his heel, Reeve replaced his hat onto his head and led the way stiffly through the crowd. Now what was that unwritten list Mae had given him again? Those things he could bring up to converse with his betrothed? Lord knows he wasn't comfortable with casual chatter. What could a man talk about with a woman he'd just met?

"So how was your trip from Maryland?" That seemed like a good conversation-starter.

"Oh, not too bad." She smiled up at him shyly. "I never traveled out of Baltimore, so this is as far as I've ever been."

"Uh, well. Farthest I've ever been is when I came here from Texas."

"For land out here?"

"For land. For cattle. I could've stayed in Texas for those things, but I also just wanted to come out here, too, mostly." The gal was traveling light. He hoisted her bag effortlessly into the rear of the wagon. "Taking you to Mae's."

"Mae's?"

"Yes. Good lady. She has some spare rooms over the saloon. I paid her for the next couple of days, so it's already taken care of." He frowned at the surprised expression on her face.

"I'm not staying with you?" That smoky voice suddenly sounded much smaller.

"Our wedding is on Saturday. Wouldn't be proper for you to stay with me right now." His voice had trailed off. As a lady, shouldn't she have known that?

"That's true. You're right." Melanie didn't sound too convinced of her own words.

"Gives me time to court you, too. Not proper-like, but we have two days." Hooking his thumbs in his belt, he added, "And if you like me enough then, I can make you my wife. Got the preacher all ready to go."

"Well... good. I..." she looked down at her shoes. "I like you enough already, Reeve."

Well, this is going to be some adventure! He suppressed a chuckle. "I like you enough, too. But we need to do this right." Reeve bent slightly, closer to her, his voice a whisper. "You'll be safe at Mae's, Melanie. I wouldn't let you stay anywhere where you'd be endangered. If I was taught anything, it was how to treat a lady."

Melanie nodded. "All right, Reeve."

That wasn't so bad after all, he told himself. A minor riff, and probably something he should have made clear. He helped her onto the wagon before loosening the horse's reins from the post, and then climbed aboard beside her.

She liked him well enough. She'd said so. That coaxed a smile from him.

"I'll take you by later to see your new home," he promised. "Thought I'd let you get settled in your room. Rest up after your long trip."

"I'd like that."

* * * * *

Melanie primly folded her hands on her lap. Was she being sweet enough? Docile enough? Just the right amount of honey in her smile?

She was worrying�actually worried for some time�for nothing. Reeve Larson didn't suspect a thing, nor did he have any cause to believe she wasn't exactly the woman he'd bargained for when he agreed to pay her expenses to come from Maryland. He had no way of knowing the gritty truth about her.

And she aimed to keep it that way.

Although she had to admit, the stay with the saloonkeeper had thrown her for a loop. Even with that, was this Mae person a fortuneteller? Unless she was, she wouldn't know the truth, either. Melanie's secret was safe.

She was free to start her new life. Really, she wasn't hurting anyone. As long as she stuck to her story, no one would ever find out, and that included her husband-to-be.

Her very handsome husband-to-be. What a pleasant surprise! She'd expected some old, wrinkly, cranky, bearded cowboy. What had been waiting for her instead was this tall, dark, and attractive cowboy.

Who also didn't talk much and came across as rather stern and brooding. Yet she was sure she could get him to warm up to her.

"Here we are, wife. Well...." Laughing softly, Reeve brought the horse to a halt. "Future wife. Let's go in so you can meet Mae."

Do I have to? Melanie wanted so badly to demand he take her to the ranch instead. She looked at the saloon as he helped her down from the wagon, masking her sullen look with a forced smile.

If she complained, she would be perceived as difficult and whining, both perfectly good reasons for him to send her packing. She knew better than that. She knew she couldn't ever go back to Maryland. A naughty and disobedient wife wasn't worth her weight in gold to a rancher. Besides, one of the girls back east had warned her about cowboys spanking their willful and misbehaving wives.

Melanie had broken into laughter when Glenda told her that. That had prompted Glenda to tell her that she wouldn't find it the least bit funny when she found her bottom being bared and soundly paddled by one of those strict cowboys.

Hurrying to keep up with the strides of Reeve's long legs, she wondered if he subscribed to that view. Just the thought of being spanked by those big hands made her tremble. She'd never been spanked, not even as a child, though more recently she had endured much more after her family had lost everything.

For now, she couldn't dwell on the past. The only thing that mattered was surviving. Going on with her life, which thanks to her husband-to-be, had brought her to a new place and new adventures.

None of which would be starting, unfortunately, until after their wedding. She tried to hide her chagrin as he held one of the swinging wooden doors open for her and they walked straight into a whiskey-scented saloon.

A woman in her early fifties stood behind the bar. A "painted woman" her father would have called her� not that Melanie was in any position to judge. It was easy to see that this painted woman had been a beauty in her youth. That is, several years and about thirty pounds ago.

She wasn't just a saloon owner. Melanie knew what she was. She resisted the urge to stamp her foot and demand that Reeve take her home instead. To the ranch, with him, where she belonged.

"Well, if it isn't Mr. Larson!" The buxom blonde leaned across the counter to kiss his cheek. "And this must be your bride. They sure do make 'em pretty out there in the city."

At the end of the bar sat a girl of no older than twenty or so. Skinny. Sort of pretty. She eyed Melanie curiously. Another painted lady, only younger.

That left no doubt in Melanie's mind. Mae was in fact running a bordello.

What if he's leaving you here? The thought terrified her, despite the forced smile she gave the madam. Would he do that? Pay her way from home just to hand her over to a bordello?

"You take good care of her for me now, Mae," Reeve said, leaning against the bar with his arm on the counter.

"You know I will, Reeve, honey." Mae turned to Melanie. "You see your ranch yet, Miss Melanie?"

"No, not yet." She smiled as demurely as possible.

"Tonight. I'm coming back for her tonight. We'll be having dinner. She'll get to see her new home then," he explained. "But we won't take up a lot of your time, Mae."

"Oh, now, honey, I always got time for a gentleman. You know that." She winked saucily at him.

Really, now? Didn't she realize she was an old woman of fifty or more? Melanie bit back a retort.

Mae motioned to the skinny whore who'd been looking on. "Janie, would you be a good girl and take Reeve's bride to her room? We're a long way from Maryland and I'm sure she'd like to rest."

"Sure will, ma'am." Grinning shyly, Janie hopped off her stool and hooked her arm through Melanie's. "This way."

Please don't leave me here, she wanted to cry and plead. She'd had her fill of people like Mae and Janie and places like that.

Looking down at her was that handsome face. The tender, kind expression in those eyes comforted her.

"You rest, all right?" He spoke softly. "And I'll be back tonight for you at seven for supper."

Miles and miles away from home. Not a soul there in that town, other than Reeve Larson, to depend on. She had no choice but to trust him.

"Fine. I'll see you tonight," she agreed reluctantly.

* * * * *

"This is the biggest room in the house, the one Mae keeps for guests and friends. Bigger than the ones us girls use. I love this bed, don't you?"

Janie certainly was a chatty little thing. She also seemed pleased with the fact that Mae had entrusted her with the task of showing Reeve Larson's bride to her room.

Melanie was polite but tired. Sighing, she looked out through the window to the street below. People were walking along the boardwalk and men rode by on horseback or on wagons, like the one Reeve had brought with him.

"It's very nice," she murmured. "I think I'm going to take a nap."

"Are you hungry, too? Because Mae said she'd also send up something for you to eat, if you want."

"Maybe in a little while."

Janie folded her hands behind her back and rocked her weight from foot to foot. "So you're from Baltimore?"

"Yes, that's right."

"That's the city." The girl sounded proud of herself for knowing that.

"Right again. Ever been there, Janie?"

"Never. Never been nowhere outside of here and Texas. Ever been to the ocean?"

Obviously, this young painted lady wanted to talk. Wearily, Melanie sat herself on the bed and dabbed at her neck with a handkerchief.

"Yes. It's beautiful," she replied.

"I've never been to the ocean. But I'd love to see it someday. You're very lucky to be marrying Mr. Larson. He's a good man. I don't know him, personally, but Mae always talks nice about him." Janie also sat on the bed, tugging a piece of candy from her skirt pocket. "Want a piece?"

"No, thank you."

"One of the men from Mr. Larson's ranch gave it to me. Arnie always brings me candy." Without breaking off a piece, she stuck the top of the stick into her mouth.

"Is Reeve's ranch far from here?" Melanie asked.

"Not too far, I don't think. Never been there, neither. Arnie says it's big, though. He's the boy who brings me candy. He bought me this, too." Removing the candy from her lips, Janie displayed a necklace with a locket. "Pretty, isn't it?"

"Very pretty."

"I think so, too. It ain't real, but Arnie gave it to me, so I always wear it. He's nicer than a lot of men. Not that Mae would ever let anybody hurt us, but you know." Janie licked her sticky lips, then inserted the candy back into her mouth and flounced off the bed. "I'd better let you rest. Don't want to get in trouble, either, in case Mae needs me."

Melanie smiled with relief. "Oh, well, if you must be going anyway�."

"I do. But I'll be back to check on you later. If you decide before that you do want something to eat, you know where to find me."

"Thank you, Janie. That's very nice of you."

Finally, she was able to close the door behind the young prostitute. Melanie leaned with her back against the door before tossing herself onto the bed, her skirt and underskirts rustling against the mattress. She rested for a few moments before pulling a blank, folded piece of paper from her travel bag. On the table near the window was set a plume, the tip tucked into an ink well. She would nap, but now that she had some time to herself, she quickly composed the letter she had been meaning to write.

June 2, 1871

My dear sister, Olivia,

I wanted you to know I arrived here in Garner Falls safely. As promised, Mr. Larson met me at the train. For propriety's sake, I will be staying with a lady friend of his for the next two days. We will be wed this Saturday.

"We will be wed this Saturday," she said that statement out loud.

Wed. She would be married. A bride. A wife. Her husband-to-be believed she was twenty-three. In actuality, she was twenty-six. Something else to hide, though it was minor in comparison to other things. Three silly, stupid years. Twenty-three just seemed to her, at least at the time, to make her more desirable and less problematic than an unmarried woman closer to thirty. So on Saturday, she would be taken as a wife by a man to whom she was lying to about her age.

And something that was nowhere near as trivial as that. On the other hand, why was she concerned about it? He wouldn't find out. There was no possible way he would find out. She was very, very sure of that.

Still, it was a lie. For those moments, she dwelled on the fact that Reeve was marrying a woman that she was portraying, like an actress, rather than the person she truly was. Her stomach tightened uncomfortably.

Melanie dipped the plume's tip into the well and, taking a deep breath, resolutely continued composing her letter.

So, my sweet sister, please don't worry about me anymore. You have enough to worry about right now. I don't know when I'll see you again, but I hope it will be sometime in this lifetime. Please know that I am excited and I am really looking forward to starting my new life with this man who is going to be my husband. He's much more handsome than I thought he would be. Already, I've been told he's a good man. Something in my heart tells me he is, too. He's trying to guard my reputation by not having me stay with him until we are married. There's something sweet and gentle in his eyes that I haven't seen in any man in a long time.

And he doesn't know about my life back there in Baltimore, the sort of woman that I was. If I can help it, he will never know. He doesn't love me right now�I would be silly to think that he does�but if Reeve does come to love me, it will be the Melanie Cranford that I want him to see.

I hope to write again after the wedding. Be patient with me, because I may be very busy with my wifely duties, and I can only imagine the challenges waiting for me on a ranch! Please send me a letter when you can.

All my love and devotion,

Melanie

She didn't know when, or if, she would ever see her older sister, Olivia, again. Melanie found an envelope in the desk, blinked back tears as she folded and inserted the letter, and then wrote her sister's address on the front. She lit the candle on the desk to seal the envelope shut with the melting wax.

After her nap, she would return to the saloon and ask Mae if she would see to it that the letter reached the mail carriers. Back in Baltimore, there were mail collection boxes. She had no idea how things worked there in Garner Falls. For now, so tired from the train ride that her body ached, she eased herself back onto the mattress.

He's much more handsome than I thought he would be. Already, I've been told he's a good man. Something in my heart tells me he is, too.

Melanie smiled. Truth be told, her blood quickened when she thought about seeing Reeve again that evening. Seven o'clock couldn't come soon enough for her. Even with her blood quickening from the excitement, she fell into a deep and luxurious sleep as soon as her head hit that soft pillow.

Martha on 09/24/2015 07:26pm
A Man with a heart and a soil dove who finds love. Wonderful story. Well written
Martha on 09/24/2015 07:26pm
A Man with a heart and a soil dove who finds love. Wonderful story. Well written
gail on 09/05/2015 10:05am
ENJOYED THIS BOOK, LOTS OF STORYLINE, AND THE MEN IN CONTROL, LOVED IT
gail on 09/05/2015 10:05am
ENJOYED THIS BOOK, LOTS OF STORYLINE, AND THE MEN IN CONTROL, LOVED IT
Avid on 11/12/2014 05:02am
Good story, plot, lots of romance and action. I really enjoyed the rogue, Forrest.
Avid on 11/12/2014 05:02am
Good story, plot, lots of romance and action. I really enjoyed the rogue, Forrest.
Es May on 10/06/2014 05:23am
This book was different. Reeve is a typical ranchman looking for a wife. In a land where the men greatly out number the women, there is little choice than to look to mail order brides. Reeve is attracted to Melanie the second she steps off the train, and she with him. Yet, Melanie has a past she was forced into since she was a child, and lies are told to cover that past. Too bad lying is one of only two things her husband says he finds to be spankable offenses. During this story we get to see the world through Melanie's eyes. Her loves, her fears, her worries. It would have been nice to see Reeve's side a bit too, but the story still did well without it. I have to admit, I found the story of Melanie's sister Olivia, and a man named Forest, to be so cute they almost stole the show. I really enjoyed their side story, and I loved how take charge he was and how she came to crave that from him.
Es May on 10/06/2014 05:23am
This book was different. Reeve is a typical ranchman looking for a wife. In a land where the men greatly out number the women, there is little choice than to look to mail order brides. Reeve is attracted to Melanie the second she steps off the train, and she with him. Yet, Melanie has a past she was forced into since she was a child, and lies are told to cover that past. Too bad lying is one of only two things her husband says he finds to be spankable offenses. During this story we get to see the world through Melanie's eyes. Her loves, her fears, her worries. It would have been nice to see Reeve's side a bit too, but the story still did well without it. I have to admit, I found the story of Melanie's sister Olivia, and a man named Forest, to be so cute they almost stole the show. I really enjoyed their side story, and I loved how take charge he was and how she came to crave that from him.
KArc on 10/02/2014 08:40pm
This is a good story about Melanie who is trying to get out of a very bad situation. She decides to answer an ad for a mail-order-bride. She never expected to meet or marry a man as handsome, reliable, caring and hardworking as Reeve. She also never expected to have to answer for all the lies she told to get there, with her bottom, but if there's one thing Reeve won't stand for it's lies. Though Melanie was frequently afraid to share her past with Reeve, there was an open acceptance of each other that was a pleasure to read about. I also enjoyed the banter between Melanie's sister Olivia and Forest.
KArc on 10/02/2014 08:40pm
This is a good story about Melanie who is trying to get out of a very bad situation. She decides to answer an ad for a mail-order-bride. She never expected to meet or marry a man as handsome, reliable, caring and hardworking as Reeve. She also never expected to have to answer for all the lies she told to get there, with her bottom, but if there's one thing Reeve won't stand for it's lies. Though Melanie was frequently afraid to share her past with Reeve, there was an open acceptance of each other that was a pleasure to read about. I also enjoyed the banter between Melanie's sister Olivia and Forest.
Denise on 09/09/2014 09:31am
I really enjoyed this story. The characters were done well and you believed in them, wanted things to work out so there could be a HEA. I almost liked Olivia and Forest's story more. The men were strong and strict, but loving too.
Denise on 09/09/2014 09:31am
I really enjoyed this story. The characters were done well and you believed in them, wanted things to work out so there could be a HEA. I almost liked Olivia and Forest's story more. The men were strong and strict, but loving too.
Juliette on 07/25/2014 03:21am
A good old fashioned western tale, with a twist. The mail order bride is a little different to the usual young lady down on her luck. The cowboy is just as we imagine a cowboy will be. I enjoyed this story and recommend it to lovers of old fashioned cowboys and the west.
Juliette on 07/25/2014 03:21am
A good old fashioned western tale, with a twist. The mail order bride is a little different to the usual young lady down on her luck. The cowboy is just as we imagine a cowboy will be. I enjoyed this story and recommend it to lovers of old fashioned cowboys and the west.
Redrabbitt on 07/13/2014 10:48pm
Melanie Cranford becomes a mail order bride to escape the life forced upon after losing both parents and her stepmother placing her and her sister in a Bordello when they are just little girls. Then they are sold to a cruel man. Reeve Larson answered an ad for a mail order bride and sent the ticket to bring Melanie to Montana. He treats her like a lady, but he won't put up with lying. He also believes in correction by spanking. Melanie wind up over his lap multiple times. Cattle rustling has been going on at the Larson ranch and he hires Forest Parrish who has a reputation for dealing with such. Melanie's sister, Olivia, comes to visit and has a run in with Forest. He is also a man who believes in taking a woman in hand. This is a fun western, with feisty women and men who know how to use domestic discipline to keep them in line.
Redrabbitt on 07/13/2014 10:48pm
Melanie Cranford becomes a mail order bride to escape the life forced upon after losing both parents and her stepmother placing her and her sister in a Bordello when they are just little girls. Then they are sold to a cruel man. Reeve Larson answered an ad for a mail order bride and sent the ticket to bring Melanie to Montana. He treats her like a lady, but he won't put up with lying. He also believes in correction by spanking. Melanie wind up over his lap multiple times. Cattle rustling has been going on at the Larson ranch and he hires Forest Parrish who has a reputation for dealing with such. Melanie's sister, Olivia, comes to visit and has a run in with Forest. He is also a man who believes in taking a woman in hand. This is a fun western, with feisty women and men who know how to use domestic discipline to keep them in line.
Timberlan127 on 07/10/2014 09:04am
I have always loved mail order bride stories. The courage it had to take to leave your home and travel hundreds of miles out west where you knew no one and marry a stranger definitely had to take a lot of character. This story more than lived up to my expectations of a great mail order bride story. It is about a prostitute that escaped to become a mail order bride an have a better future. She keeps her past a secret from her new husband. Her sister also joins her and finds a husband of her own. This story was full of strong women who made the west a better place through their caring and love. It was also full of strong men who were not afraid to stand up for what was right and to keep their women on the right path. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great Read !!!
Timberlan127 on 07/10/2014 09:04am
I have always loved mail order bride stories. The courage it had to take to leave your home and travel hundreds of miles out west where you knew no one and marry a stranger definitely had to take a lot of character. This story more than lived up to my expectations of a great mail order bride story. It is about a prostitute that escaped to become a mail order bride an have a better future. She keeps her past a secret from her new husband. Her sister also joins her and finds a husband of her own. This story was full of strong women who made the west a better place through their caring and love. It was also full of strong men who were not afraid to stand up for what was right and to keep their women on the right path. I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great Read !!!
DKT on 07/05/2014 09:33pm
I really enjoyed this historical romance. Melanie is a mail order bride that is escaping her past and looking forward to a new life. Reeve is looking for a wife to settle down with and start a family. They both feel the chemistry between each other immediately. However Melanie is to ashamed and humiliated about her past to share it with her husband Reeve. She is afraid she won’t want her because of her past. She continues to lie and keep secrets. Reeve knows she is hiding something but can’t get her to share with him. Eventually though Melanie realizes the emotional toll her past is having on her. She also doesn’t like the invisible barrier that it has created between Reeve and her. Reeve is strict but loving with her. He is not afraid to spank her when she gets sassy or disobedient. Melanie decides she has to come clean and be honest with Reeve about her past. Reeve surprises her with his reaction. She learns that he loves her for who she is and not for what she had to do to survive. A well written, beautiful love story.
DKT on 07/05/2014 09:33pm
I really enjoyed this historical romance. Melanie is a mail order bride that is escaping her past and looking forward to a new life. Reeve is looking for a wife to settle down with and start a family. They both feel the chemistry between each other immediately. However Melanie is to ashamed and humiliated about her past to share it with her husband Reeve. She is afraid she won۪t want her because of her past. She continues to lie and keep secrets. Reeve knows she is hiding something but can۪t get her to share with him. Eventually though Melanie realizes the emotional toll her past is having on her. She also doesn۪t like the invisible barrier that it has created between Reeve and her. Reeve is strict but loving with her. He is not afraid to spank her when she gets sassy or disobedient. Melanie decides she has to come clean and be honest with Reeve about her past. Reeve surprises her with his reaction. She learns that he loves her for who she is and not for what she had to do to survive. A well written, beautiful love story.
Jaycee on 07/03/2014 06:10pm
Very enjoyable historical story about a young woman trying to escape her past. I usually don't always enjoy stories where one character keeps important information from the other, especially throughout most of the story, but the author handled this very well. I thought Reeve was a bit strict at first, but he quickly grew on me. And I really liked his reaction once he found out the truth. Melanie was a great mix of innocence and temptation. Her interactions with Mae and her "girls" were both humorous and touching. The addition of Olivia and Forrest made the story even better! I didn't like Forrest much at first - he wronged Olivia yet proceeded to punish her for her retaliation. I was hoping Forrest would have apologized or at least felt guilty about it. He became much more likable as the story progressed, and it was fun seeing this tough cowboy fall in love. Certainly a story worth reading!
Jaycee on 07/03/2014 06:10pm
"Very enjoyable historical story about a young woman trying to escape her past. I usually don't always enjoy stories where one character keeps important information from the other, especially throughout most of the story, but the author handled this very well. I thought Reeve was a bit strict at first, but he quickly grew on me. And I really liked his reaction once he found out the truth. Melanie was a great mix of innocence and temptation. Her interactions with Mae and her ""girls"" were both humorous and touching. The addition of Olivia and Forrest made the story even better! I didn't like Forrest much at first - he wronged Olivia yet proceeded to punish her for her retaliation. I was hoping Forrest would have apologized or at least felt guilty about it. He became much more likable as the story progressed, and it was fun seeing this tough cowboy fall in love. Certainly a story worth reading!"
anon on 07/02/2014 04:53am
Love mail order brides that go well. This was a delightful story of a young couple getting to know and care for each other. Melanie has to learn to trust and allow her new husband to care for her. Reeve has to learn to share and trust his life with a new wife. The relationship between the two sisters adds to the story. I especially loved the sister twist at the end of the story. Good read.
anon on 07/02/2014 04:53am
Love mail order brides that go well. This was a delightful story of a young couple getting to know and care for each other. Melanie has to learn to trust and allow her new husband to care for her. Reeve has to learn to share and trust his life with a new wife. The relationship between the two sisters adds to the story. I especially loved the sister twist at the end of the story. Good read.
JK on 07/01/2014 10:11am
I loved every single page of this story! First of all, it was long enough!! Secondly, I love that our heroine, was a wonderful character with flaws and secrets! The heat and the love between the 2 main characters was more than enough for me to give this 5 stars, but the addition of the sister coming to town and also having a "romance", was the icing on the cake! This was well written, exciting, and had great spankings!
JK on 07/01/2014 10:11am
"I loved every single page of this story! First of all, it was long enough!! Secondly, I love that our heroine, was a wonderful character with flaws and secrets! The heat and the love between the 2 main characters was more than enough for me to give this 5 stars, but the addition of the sister coming to town and also having a ""romance"", was the icing on the cake! This was well written, exciting, and had great spankings!"
madpuss on 07/01/2014 12:25am
I very much enjoyed Melanie and Olivia's story. I loved the mix of anxiety, excitement, naughtiness, fun and humour as they both sought a happier future for themselves. It had the right mix of all these things. It was a sweet romance and a good story. Melanie's Reeve was a great guy, loving and caring and a gentleman while Olivia's Forest was a likeable rogue interested in having a good time but who redeems himself in the end.
madpuss on 07/01/2014 12:25am
I very much enjoyed Melanie and Olivia's story. I loved the mix of anxiety, excitement, naughtiness, fun and humour as they both sought a happier future for themselves. It had the right mix of all these things. It was a sweet romance and a good story. Melanie's Reeve was a great guy, loving and caring and a gentleman while Olivia's Forest was a likeable rogue interested in having a good time but who redeems himself in the end.
Scarlet on 06/30/2014 09:46am
This story has all the great traits of a western romance mixed with some of the best domestic discipline situations I've read. The love the couple shares is sweet and rich. His protectiveness of her is very realistic as is her reluctance to be completely honest with him for fear of losing his love. There are several great spanking scenes described, all for good cause, nothing abusive or petty. Her friendship with the saloon ladies adds a nice twist that was pleasing to see.
Scarlet on 06/30/2014 09:46am
This story has all the great traits of a western romance mixed with some of the best domestic discipline situations I've read. The love the couple shares is sweet and rich. His protectiveness of her is very realistic as is her reluctance to be completely honest with him for fear of losing his love. There are several great spanking scenes described, all for good cause, nothing abusive or petty. Her friendship with the saloon ladies adds a nice twist that was pleasing to see.
SH on 06/30/2014 05:24am
This is a great mail order bride story that comes with a great HEA! I enjoyed the plot idea as the mail order bride had a few secrets and a less than glamorous past (don't want to give anything away). She meets Reeve for the first time and they are lucky enough to have a connection right away. Melanie's sister ends up coming for a visit, which turns into a permanent stay, and finds her own chance at happiness. There are a lot of additional characters in this story which helped make it a great read. Enjoyed it!
SH on 06/30/2014 05:24am
This is a great mail order bride story that comes with a great HEA! I enjoyed the plot idea as the mail order bride had a few secrets and a less than glamorous past (don't want to give anything away). She meets Reeve for the first time and they are lucky enough to have a connection right away. Melanie's sister ends up coming for a visit, which turns into a permanent stay, and finds her own chance at happiness. There are a lot of additional characters in this story which helped make it a great read. Enjoyed it!
Mattie on 06/29/2014 11:05am
This is a love story for not just one sister but two. Trying to move on from her past, Melanie tells some lies to Reeve. Reeve get to the bottom of them as well as puts a hand to Melanie's. Her sister Olivia ends up in town and finds her own man.
Mattie on 06/29/2014 11:05am
This is a love story for not just one sister but two. Trying to move on from her past, Melanie tells some lies to Reeve. Reeve get to the bottom of them as well as puts a hand to Melanie's. Her sister Olivia ends up in town and finds her own man.
angel on 06/29/2014 08:39am
This is a great story filled with action and romance The story is well written with a plot that keeps you turning the pages
angel on 06/29/2014 08:39am
This is a great story filled with action and romance The story is well written with a plot that keeps you turning the pages
SL on 06/27/2014 01:41pm
What a cute story. It is all about mail order brides finding happiness in Montana. Melanie lied about her past in order to become a mail order bride. She lied about her age as well as her past profession. It was a hard life for her and her sister, but she was abandoned as a child at a brothel. We don’t dive heavily into the character of each of the men or women. It is a short novella. You know their story and you see them interact in a new setting. They are trying to protect their secrets because they are unsure if it will be their downfall of their happiness. You know they have a good heart by what projects they are trying to accomplish. You also know that they end up loving their respective husbands. There are a lot of judgmental people in Montana at that time. There are the wives and church goers and then there is Mae’s place which is also a brothel. Melanie and Olivia are treated kindly by Mae and her girls. This story gives you a bit of a taste of Mail order bride. It also gives you a taste of what people think of ladies and ladies of the night. I am sure there was that kind of prejudice in the time. The story has several spanking scenes with a brush, hand and switch. There are no extremely graphic sexual scenes. The spankings aren’t severe and the wives are justly punished. There is a happy ending and a follow up a year later. It was a cute story of the old west with mail order brides and spanking that were deserved.
SL on 06/27/2014 01:41pm
What a cute story. It is all about mail order brides finding happiness in Montana. Melanie lied about her past in order to become a mail order bride. She lied about her age as well as her past profession. It was a hard life for her and her sister, but she was abandoned as a child at a brothel. We don۪t dive heavily into the character of each of the men or women. It is a short novella. You know their story and you see them interact in a new setting. They are trying to protect their secrets because they are unsure if it will be their downfall of their happiness. You know they have a good heart by what projects they are trying to accomplish. You also know that they end up loving their respective husbands. There are a lot of judgmental people in Montana at that time. There are the wives and church goers and then there is Mae۪s place which is also a brothel. Melanie and Olivia are treated kindly by Mae and her girls. This story gives you a bit of a taste of Mail order bride. It also gives you a taste of what people think of ladies and ladies of the night. I am sure there was that kind of prejudice in the time. The story has several spanking scenes with a brush, hand and switch. There are no extremely graphic sexual scenes. The spankings aren۪t severe and the wives are justly punished. There is a happy ending and a follow up a year later. It was a cute story of the old west with mail order brides and spanking that were deserved.
Noangel on 06/26/2014 05:25am
There is romance and action on every page The plot is great well written with all you could want in a western with some added spice The Hero has his hands full with his feisty brat But he has no problem taking her in hand and over his knee when needed If you like strong men who are also loving and caring and strong women who can keep them on their toes you will love this story
Noangel on 06/26/2014 05:25am
There is romance and action on every page The plot is great well written with all you could want in a western with some added spice The Hero has his hands full with his feisty brat But he has no problem taking her in hand and over his knee when needed If you like strong men who are also loving and caring and strong women who can keep them on their toes you will love this story
angel on 06/26/2014 05:09am
This is a great story with a great plot There is romance and action on every pages The Hero has his hands full with his feisty brat But he has no problem taking her in hand and over his knee when needed If you like strong men who are also loving and caring and strong women who can keep them on their toes you will love this story
angel on 06/26/2014 05:09am
This is a great story with a great plot There is romance and action on every pages The Hero has his hands full with his feisty brat But he has no problem taking her in hand and over his knee when needed If you like strong men who are also loving and caring and strong women who can keep them on their toes you will love this story

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